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Ian Llewellyn ap-Griffith
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0 posted 2000-08-04 12:40 PM


White tiger Winter
Come down from your mountain-top
Your season is here
Give your winter-wind-roar
And slash your claws of ice
Across the frozen earth
Make your meal of warmth
And sleep until spring


I've lately been lamenting for Winter in Dark Passions #2 so I thought I'd share some cold weather words in here.



Sing while you may
-The Prophet Q'spel

Your pain is for you alone, As it is, As it was, As it will be forever, Amen
-The Prophet Q'spel


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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-08-04 03:53 AM


Ian~
Your phrases create a lovely image.

But I don't want to give up the
warm and wonderful days of summer !

I'm a lover of hot weather ...
but your poem offers refreshment.
~*Marge*~


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ethome
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2 posted 2000-08-04 03:59 AM


I agree with Marge...I'm from up north in the cold country and I am clinging to the wonderful days of summer as long as I can before that white tiger winter as you call it comes and claws at my face. Great verse ..enjoyed.
tracie66
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3 posted 2000-08-04 04:05 AM


Ian~
This is a great poem but hey I'm suffering enough here in Australia where it is winter
Nice writings Ian
...how bout a warm one next time  
Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe


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