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Master
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2000-09-24 10:48 PM


“I used to love you,” -- he said sadly,
“My heartbeat raced, when in my sight,
You had appeared. I loved you madly,
But all my dreams have burned in flight.”

“You’re such a liar,” -- she said softly,
“The words you utter aren’t real.
The love that’s true is always lofty;
Love never ends... I love you still.”


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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-09-25 05:41 AM


Yes I understand this kind of Love...sometimes we have to let go when our love is not returned in a timely manner..
for it does hurt to fall in love all alone..when love is to share...James

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
2 posted 2000-09-25 01:12 PM


Master-No truer words spoken than love never ends, no matter what the ending.  Very nice read from your heart.
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