Open Poetry #9 |
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Thinking Of You . . . |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina ![]() |
Thinking Of You At early dawn I think of you, Watching sunrise with flaming hues, Warming my heart, Shinning on the spot, That you fill . . . In quiet morn I pause and think of you, Seeing a robin beautiful and blue, Watching her fly with gifted wings, Listening to the song she sings, She sings of you . . . At noonday I stop and think of you, Admiring the clouds so soft, so new, I sigh as crystal rain begins to fall, I listen to its gentle call, It speaks your name . . . At midnight I lie to rest and think of you, I find calm with earth subdued, I smile as the stars in rhythm dance, Twirling to the tune of our romance, They shine for you. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very beautiful poem! Loved every line. Smiles for you. ![]() ![]() |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww insect thanks so much and big smiles for you too. ![]() ![]() Juls |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I find myself thinking about Mina this way...James |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Ah yes. To always be thinking of that special person, keeping them in every thought. This one Shines Juls! ![]() ~Sheri |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
James, it was so nice to see that you could relate to this and my feelings. Irie, you are right. I am certainly always thinking of him. If this shines it's because of the inspiration he is to me. Thanks so much. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Juls, I enjoy seeing the love and happiness shared on these pages. Your poem just oozes it! Dee [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-24-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Dee thanks so much. It's been years since I've been this happy and felt this much joy. I'm so glad to hear it's coming through. |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Juls. . . you just get better with everything that I read from you. . . this is no exception. . . Just wonderful my friend. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sven thanks my friend. If I'm getting better it's only because each day with the man in my life keeps getting better. |
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