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juliet_2u
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0 posted 2000-09-23 05:21 PM


   Thinking Of You

   At early dawn I think of you,
  Watching sunrise with flaming hues,
Warming my heart,
Shinning on the spot,
That you fill . . .

In quiet morn I pause and think of you,
Seeing a robin beautiful and blue,
Watching her fly with gifted wings,
Listening to the song she sings,
She sings of you . . .

At noonday I stop and think of you,
Admiring the clouds so soft, so new,
I sigh as crystal rain begins to fall,
I listen to its gentle call,
It speaks your name . . .

At midnight I lie to rest and think of you,
I find calm with earth subdued,
I smile as the stars in rhythm dance,
Twirling to the tune of our romance,
They shine for you.



    


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insect
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1 posted 2000-09-23 05:25 PM


Very beautiful poem!
Loved every line.
Smiles for you.

juliet_2u
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2 posted 2000-09-23 05:29 PM


Awww insect thanks so much and big smiles for you too.    
Juls

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2000-09-23 09:27 PM


I find myself thinking about Mina this way...James
Irie
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4 posted 2000-09-24 01:19 AM


Ah yes. To always be thinking of that special person, keeping them in every thought.
This one Shines Juls!  


~Sheri

juliet_2u
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5 posted 2000-09-24 06:02 AM


James, it was so nice to see that you could relate to this and my feelings.


Irie, you are right. I am certainly always thinking of him. If this shines it's because of the inspiration he is to me. Thanks so much.

Dee
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6 posted 2000-09-24 06:26 AM


Juls, I enjoy seeing the love and happiness shared on these pages. Your poem just oozes it!
Dee


[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-24-2000).]

juliet_2u
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7 posted 2000-09-24 08:54 AM


Oh Dee thanks so much. It's been years since I've been this happy and felt this much joy. I'm so glad to hear it's coming through.
Sven
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8 posted 2000-09-24 01:59 PM


Juls. . . you just get better with everything that I read from you. . . this is no exception. . .

Just wonderful my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


juliet_2u
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9 posted 2000-09-24 02:06 PM


Sven thanks my friend. If I'm getting better it's only because each day with the man in my life keeps getting better.
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