Your Vase (Mark's Challange..again..)

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rosepetals25

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0 posted 2000-09-23 10:30 AM

Ok.. I know I just posted one not to long ago.. but I just did this one and I like it better..

Your Vase

This love that
I feel so deeply inside
Grows inside my spirit every
Day and through out every night
I want you here, by my side for all of
Eternity... though a thousands lifetimes
And yet that would still not be enough time
To overcome the wonderment that is here in
My heart at what you do for me.  You make
Feel as if I can fly, soar over the earth on
On a high of love and life. Your love is
Like a rose blossoming and growing
In beauty and elegance.  I am your
Vase. Holding you up, waning to
Be your home, all your comfort
Wanting to return all you give
To me. I want to give back
all the joy and warmth
that only you can
deliver in the night.  Our love so delicate,
but so strong, withstanding the world, destined to be.

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-23-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

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In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-23 10:54 AM

WOW......wow .....wow....the poem in this vase you brought is so beautiful. Your talent is showing and now it is time for ME to say that if you are not careful someone is going to call you a poet. LIKE ME!!!!! CHALLENGE MET

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

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2 posted 2000-09-23 01:06 PM

Extra credit...no fair...lol

Just kidding this is great in format and content. You are a very talented writer~

Irie
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since 1999-12-01

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3 posted 2000-09-23 01:33 PM

And another WOW.
This is awesome rosepetals.
This piece is blooming with tenderness and love.

Putting this in my library.

~Sheri

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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4 posted 2000-09-23 02:36 PM

RosePetals~
Perfect that a RosePetal's heart would rest within a vase.
Lovely, my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

rosepetals25

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5 posted 2000-09-23 09:23 PM

Mark - What an amazing compliment coming from you, such an incredable writer. Thank you so much for your encouraging words

Butterflies - ~blushes~ Thank you so much

I am proud of that compliment.. you are so talented yourself and for you to think the same way about my writing is beyond flattering

Irie - I'm glad you liked it so much

Thank you for the wow

Marge - Aww. thank you

I'm so glad you stopped in and you enjoyed the poem

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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6 posted 2000-09-23 10:05 PM

very creative..love it..

rosepetals25

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7 posted 2000-09-24 01:02 AM

Victoria - Thank you

I'm happy you enjoyed it.

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