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Diamond In The Rough (Mark's Challange)
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Diamond In The Rough (Mark's Challange) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Diamond In The Rough * * I’m so Thankful for This love you give You complete my heart You fill me with a happiness The most talented of poets Couldn’t express the joy I feel churning inside That you give To me * ** * In your Loving warm Eyes I see my future Shimmering so brightly Like a diamond in the rough Shines brightly inside my Growing, thankful heart The rest of my life I will always Love you * * [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-23-2000).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Ok.. I know I took the easy way out.. lol. So feel free to yell at me. I tried a circle..but it wasn't happening... (I will keep working on it however  ) and I tried a heart.. that's never going to happen..lolol. So.. it is diamonds. Hey.. I tried..hehe  |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Very well done!!! A fantastic piece of weave wrapped up nicely in dimonds. Great Work~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well now, I would say you met the challenge in style. Wonderful verse in more than one way. The sentiments are lovely and now if you go to open 10(the NEW) forum you will see my entry as promised and maybe you should repost them there. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ The beauty of the diamond - shines within the sparkling facets of the words. Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Butterflies - Thanks I didn't know if I would get this one done..lol. It was frustrating there for a second or two..hehe.Mark - Thank you I think I am going to repost them in the new forum. Marge - Your replies to my poems are always so sweet Thank you. |
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