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The Stage of Love |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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There is a harp within the wind that plucks at my soul playing me in the orchestra of fools Cymbals of our love haunt the night in the breeze as the drum in my heart beats alone There is a harp within the wind that plucks at my soul entangled within maple batons of the night In the pit of my being my heart aches for you but the curtain of the night has descended You are not in the spotlight of my heart anymore I am free to love and be loved by another In the wings I await for my cue for love knowing his love will upstage yours There is a harp within the wind that plucks at my soul hoping his love, not a theatrical role [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 09-22-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ I really liked the musical accompaniment to this theatrical piece. VERY well done. 'In the wings I await for my cue for love knowing his love will upstage yours' Go for the second curtain call, gal ! ! Applause ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I cant wait Ha ha..thanks Marge..  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
I cant wait Ha ha..thanks Marge.. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I applaud with a standing ovation. Love this.  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Leave em always wanting more....An old saying in the biz...dont remember who said it but I do know that your supporting actor will miss his Leading Lady....got to if he has any sense at all. Now of course he will just have to watch as you upstage him in life and love with your more deserving partner that I am sure will be in the wings very soon. Wonderful write. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Insect..and for peeking in.. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Mark..auditions are tomorrow ha ha appreciate your kind words.. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
you can always be counted to supply rich imagery - this time I read strength and fortitude as well - you go girl - give them an encore they'll never forget |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ok billy bob ha ha..i think you know me better then anyone here..you know im a survivor..you have been putting up with my tears for three years now ha ha.. im running out of tissues.. |
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