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Seven Words |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Seven Words Sweetheart my feelings are growing for you and I hope your feelings are growing too. You have my Love and you have my heart and I sincerely hope we will never part. Reassure me if you can because I really want to be your man. I could not bear it if you said go away. I will be eternally sad if you don't stay. So these seven words I offer to you today. "I Love you so never go away." I.............hope you will Love.....me with all your heart. You.......mean the world to me So..........I hope and pray nothing keeps us apart. Never....forget that if you stay or choose to go..........away, I Love the way you stole my heart away... Please take my Love and take my heart and may these seven words bond us closer together never to part.. Jameslee@September20,2000 TobeautifulMina [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Awww James how could she resist that?... Very beautiful work. Juls |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
James, this is so sweet. The way you have written it is wonderful. I have never seen a poem written that way before. (maybe I just don't get out much) Dee |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Jamming Jame's style I do believe it should be called. Wonderful read sir and I would say you chances are very good in keeping her if you continue to write your heart. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well, if she doesn't, let me know, I know a number that WILL! But, I'm sure you've caught that butterfly my friend jwesley |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
James, Awww, what a sweet plea my friend!!! I am sure she cannot resist this one. It is beautiful beyond a doubt!! I hope she feels the same.  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James...how wonderful my friend...you KNOW my thoughts on this...simply beautiful |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Juliet, Dee, Mark, JWesley, Lone Wolf, and Paula for the wonderful remarks... JWesley my heart felt joy when I read you think I have caught this butterfly...I am starting to believe she wants to be caught. Paula I have shared some wonderful moments with Mina and hope to share many more...I told her on the phone today that I think I am falling in Love with her...she said that is good...I told her only if she feels the same way... a smile is on my face...James |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James I too think you've caught this butterfly. Beautifully writen as always, and such a delightful read and one of your best I think. Well done.  [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 09-22-2000).] |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~This is gorgeous. I loved it!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Marsha and Beth...I appreciate your nice comments...James |
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