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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

0 posted 2000-09-22 03:03 PM



Tomorrow, a new day starts,
and old souls shall find new hearts.
Tomorrow, the winds will blow,
and all the wooden boats shall row.

Tomorrow, the birds will fly,
and tears will fall from my eyes.
Tomorrow, I shall find peace,

Today, I will pray to Christ,
hopping he'll send a ray of light.
Tomorrow, I'll feel God's grace,
and have a smile on my face.

Tomorrow, the sun will shine,
and forever you'll be mine.

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Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
1 posted 2000-09-22 03:10 PM


Tomorrow, a new day starts,
and old souls, shall find new hearts.
Tomorrow, the wind will blow,
and all the wooden boats, shall row.

Tomorrow, the birds will fly,
and tears, shall fall from my eyes.
Tomorrow, I will find peace,
and all my sadness, shall cease.

Today, I will pray to Jesus Christ,
hopping he'll send me, a ray of light.
Tomorrow, I'll feel God's grace,
and have a smile, on my face.

Tomorrow, the sun will shine,
and forever, you'll be mine.


Nathan

Jenn E
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada
2 posted 2000-09-22 03:56 PM


This was a wonderful read, filled with the hopes of tommorow's..........Tis true, sadness does not last forever but I guess we all have to go through it to develop our emotions and make us who we are. The ending of this is perfect.  
Jenn E

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
3 posted 2000-09-22 05:24 PM


Thank you Jen E, for responding to my poem and thanks for your wonderful comments.

Nathan

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4 posted 2000-09-24 09:47 AM


Nate~
I don't know how this beauty slipped by me-
but I'm glad for this glorious Sunday morning
to find the serenity of your thoughts.

Hope all is well in your corner of the world.
I miss seeing you here as often as before.
Hope you'll be able to spend more time with us.

It's always a pleasure to read you.
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Nate Dogg
Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
5 posted 2000-09-26 12:34 PM


Thank you Marge, for that beautiful reply...I hope you have a great day!

Nathan

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