Heirloom Memories (repost)

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Open Poetry #9

Heirloom Memories (repost)

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2000-09-21 11:31 PM

We gained serenity from our vows to love
and drew together in celebration
young in spirit and heart we began
our lives of collaboration

Will our love survive to that golden time
will your hand still reach out to find me
will we still note each glance, each touch
that guides us to our eternity

Or will we blink and loose the sight
of what was planned as love’s design
will we turn and walk away
from the world that is yours and mine

Perhaps the future is best unknown
each moment seen as a cherished token
that combined with our love will ever be
a bond that remains unbroken.

When does a memory become an heirloom
to be passed down from heart to soul
when all the beautiful tomorrows
become the yesterdays that make us whole

Trew
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since 2000-06-10

Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-21 11:59 PM

Beautiful. Perfect. Wow!

Oh there's just so much to comment on in this piece. I'm going to side with still reaching out to find her. It is just so romantic an image. And the contrary is just too sad.

Did I mention Wow?!?

Trev.

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2000-09-22 12:13 PM

This is sooooo beautiful!
May all your fond memories be handed down
and cherished

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2000-09-22 05:31 PM

Thank you for your kind replies. I found this one lingering in Open 1 and decided to repost it.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

4 posted 2000-09-22 05:48 PM

PdV you should repost your favorites more often...there's a whole new audience out there...I remember, and you are correct, quite worthy of a comeback...

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2000-09-22 07:11 PM

After reading this poem, all I can say is WOW. Beautiful as always. Please post some more of your oldies but goodies for us to read and enjoy once again

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

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