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Dawn's Rose
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Dawn's Rose |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Cool is the whisper, of breezes at dawn, The kiss of morn's dew, on emerald green lawn. Smell of sweet jasmine, angelic bouquet, Soft glow of sun's rising, advent of new day. Verdant the meadow, in morning's begin, Songbirds awaken, commencing day's din. Darkness retreating, onslaught of the sun, Helios the victor, of warmth does forerun. Alone in the distance, no jewel can compare, A single primrose, pure beauty so rare. First rays of the sun, lone primrose encase, Splendor of nature, in dawning's embrace. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mike, I can almost see the dew sitting on the soft petals. Beautiful. Dee |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Mike--What beauty you see with your poet's eye...thank you for such lovely capture. |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Mike!.... you have painted such a crisp mornings' picture here.....lovely! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Well, now - You probably know what I think already...  |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
How pleasant. Such a nice way to begin the day. Thanks, Melton |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you Dee for your very kind reply. Martie...Hi back at ya... cooling off here in Kansas... how's Ca? thank you so much for the comment. English Rose... I appreciate your reading and glad you enjoyed. Nan... yep... I can see with the chambers of you inner mind... *smile* Melton... thank you muchly for the gracious reply. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Breathtaking as always, Mike! Soooo lovely!!  Denise |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mike, Simple a beautiful picture you have painted here, so very much enjoyed. Love, Cerernity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Always caught in the beauty of your roses - 'First rays of the sun, lone primrose encase, Splendor of nature, in dawning's embrace.' You draw the roses so well - I've only to fill the vases with your fresh bouquet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Mike, I couldn't possible pick them. They have to stay right where they are. Beautifully written and splendid flow. Thanks Take care, Linda Munday |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Mike,I lkied it alot!!!!!!!! |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was breathtaking! What a vivid pitcure you have penned here! Great write........not only can I see it I can smell it....... And this is much better then this COLD day here in Alberta..... where it is snowing!!! Brrrrrrr!!! lolJenn E |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Cool breeze, warm coffee, gentle sunrise, glistening rose. A beautiful image you have given me today, Mike. Thanks for the smile! Wonderful... Trev. |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Denise, thank you my friend..btw.. did I ever tell you we almost named our one twin Denise? (my brother's suggestion, then would have named the boy, Denephew) Cerenity... I appreciate your gracious reply, glad you enjoyed. Marge...you are a rose...you fill the passion's vase with your poetic beauty. Linda.. thank you for the very nicely reply. It is appreciated. Vandana... you have made me smile, I am glad you enjoyed my poem. Dawn must be beautiful in India. Jenn... thank you kindly for reading and replying so nicely. Trev... glad you enjoyed. I don't drink coffee, but nothing better than a coke at sunrise... thanks for the reply. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a beautiful bouquet you paint with your words! I loved the imagery. A primrose by any other name would still be called Mike  Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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