Open Poetry #9 |
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Secret of the Fruit Basket |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle ![]() |
Grasping in one hand firm The tip in the other Anticipation making me squirm I can't wait to get further. My fingers strip it bare Revealing hard sticky core With no one I'll share I want this and more. To my mouth I receive it A light teasing touch The taste.... Ahhhhhhhhhh the taste I enjoy Ohhhhhhhhhh so much... My lips surround it My teeth sink in The pleasure I'm finding Is a consuming sin. When I've taken my fill And I've spent my zeal The only thing left Is the banana peel. ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
Whew! Lucky banana... ![]() LOL!! Nice to see a touch of sassy humour at this hour! Very well written indeed! Trev. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
I'm just chansie in the mood to be sassy ![]() Hey Trew....happy you enjoyed! Thank you ![]() ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I loved it particularly the ending. |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Thanks for tasting this little morsel, Alan ![]() ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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grandiloquent Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 104Midwest America |
Boy, this got me giggling. Chansondegeste, You sure know how to bait an audience. ~ megan p.s. What do you do when you're eating chocolate??? |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
When I eat chocolate? I positively gush! hehehe No, just kidding. Happy you like! ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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