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Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
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Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-21 10:53 PM


Grasping in one hand firm
The tip in the other
Anticipation making me squirm
I can't wait to get further.
My fingers strip it bare
Revealing hard sticky core
With no one I'll share
I want this and more.
To my mouth I receive it
A light teasing touch
The taste....
Ahhhhhhhhhh the taste
I enjoy Ohhhhhhhhhh so much...
My lips surround it
My teeth sink in
The pleasure I'm finding
Is a consuming sin.
When I've taken my fill
And I've spent my zeal
The only thing left


Is the banana peel.



...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


© Copyright 2000 Dorene M. Harris - All Rights Reserved
Trew
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since 2000-06-10
Posts 365
Ottawa, Canada
1 posted 2000-09-21 11:24 PM


Whew!  Lucky banana...  
LOL!!
Nice to see a touch of sassy humour at this hour!
Very well written indeed!

Trev.

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
2 posted 2000-09-21 11:29 PM


I'm just chansie
in the mood to be sassy  

Hey Trew....happy you enjoyed!
Thank you  


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


Alan
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since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499
right next door
3 posted 2000-09-21 11:33 PM


I loved it particularly the ending.
Chanson
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
4 posted 2000-09-21 11:41 PM


Thanks for tasting this little morsel, Alan  

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


grandiloquent
Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 104
Midwest America
5 posted 2000-09-22 12:10 PM


Boy, this got me giggling. Chansondegeste, You sure know how to bait an audience.

~ megan

p.s. What do you do when you're eating chocolate???

Chanson
Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle
6 posted 2000-09-22 12:16 PM


When I eat chocolate? I positively gush! hehehe No, just kidding.
Happy you like!


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


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