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juliet_2u
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0 posted 2000-09-21 10:25 PM



Rose Of Love

As surely as the rose does bloom,
Spreading petals in crystal morning dew,
So surely does my love grow for you.
And like its petals soft to touch,
Each one designed with velvet plush,
So is my heart with you inside,
Now bloomed so full and open wide.
As the rose begins to form,
We see its true beauty,
So soft, so warm,
As is the love I share with you,
Now just a tiny tender bud,
Soon the sweetest rose of love.








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Trew
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1 posted 2000-09-21 11:17 PM


Ooooooh... that is sweet!
So beautiful an image, that blossoming love.
May we all feel love so strong!
Great poem, Juls.

Trev.

juliet_2u
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2 posted 2000-09-21 11:24 PM


Awww Trev thank you so much. You're always so sweet.
Juls

Mark Bohannan
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3 posted 2000-09-22 12:22 PM


Very sweet poem and I am so glad to see you happy.  You deserve to be and I HOPE the guy knows how lucky he is.


Chanson
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4 posted 2000-09-22 12:27 PM


Juls, what better way to signify Love
than with a rose.

So beautiful  


...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture


juliet_2u
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5 posted 2000-09-22 02:06 AM


Awww Mark, my dear sweet friend. You are way too good to me. Thank you so much for the beautiful rose. And yes rest assured my friend the guy thinks he's lucky.

Chanson thank you so much. I look forward to talking with you again real soon. Until then take great care my friend.

BSC
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6 posted 2000-09-22 09:59 AM


Awww Juls, Is there any way to better describe your love than as a tender rose bud???  I can't think of one.  This is beautiful.  Bonnie
juliet_2u
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7 posted 2000-09-22 10:23 AM


Dear sweet Bonnie, your words always bring a smile to my face. And yes a young tender rose bud is a beautiful thing isn't it?...Thanks my sweet friend.
Juls

Victoria
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8 posted 2000-09-22 10:45 AM


lovely words and images..enjoyed..
juliet_2u
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9 posted 2000-09-22 10:54 AM


Victoria thanks so much. I'm glad you enjoyed.
Juls

Parker
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10 posted 2000-09-22 12:10 PM


Juls, yes the rose is love. This is a wonderful piece... I love rose poems.

Parker

juliet_2u
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11 posted 2000-09-22 12:17 PM


Awww Parker I'm glad you liked it. Although tulips are my fav. roses are his, so there ya go. But I do love roses as well.
Butterflies_dont_cry
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12 posted 2000-09-22 12:36 PM


So very tender and beautiful with the scent of love gracing the petals....excellent work!
juliet_2u
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13 posted 2000-09-22 08:29 PM


Holly, as always you're so sweet and kind. Thanks so much my friend.
Juls

Honeybee
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14 posted 2000-09-22 08:39 PM



I'm so glad that a rose like you has found her match.  A beautiful poem!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



juliet_2u
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15 posted 2000-09-22 08:44 PM


Oh Melissa what a lovely thing to say. Thanks so much sweet friend...Big big hugs to ya.
Juls

rosepetals25
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16 posted 2000-09-22 09:12 PM


Juliet,

  What a beautiful sweet poem  

                           rp25

juliet_2u
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17 posted 2000-09-22 09:17 PM


Rosepetals,

  What a beautiful sweet reply  

Balladeer
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18 posted 2000-09-22 09:19 PM


Well, he better think he's lucky or he doesn't deserve to be in your garden! uh, did that come out right?  
juliet_2u
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19 posted 2000-09-22 09:25 PM


Omgggggggggg 'Deer, ROTFL...Yeah I think that come out just like you meant it to. I just can't stop laughing here. Big hugs my friend for making this little southern girl laugh so hard.
Juls

Sven
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20 posted 2000-09-23 04:21 PM


LOL at Balladeer!!  

This is just great Juls. . . your writing is getting better by the day. . . you obviously have a new inspiration. . . just wonderful my friend. . .  

----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Irish Rose
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21 posted 2000-09-23 04:24 PM


As a lover of roses, this was special, thank you for posting this one!

Kathleen


juliet_2u
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22 posted 2000-09-23 04:26 PM


Now Sven how did you figure that one out?...lol. I have a wonderful new inspiration. I'll introduce you to him one day.
juliet_2u
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23 posted 2000-09-23 04:28 PM


Awww Irishrose you are so welcome. It was my pleasure to write this.
insect
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24 posted 2000-09-23 06:32 PM


Such a pretty poem!
I like this one too.
May the sun shine on your day to
open the petals and show you love.

juliet_2u
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25 posted 2000-09-23 06:46 PM


Oh insect what a lovely wish, thanks so much.
Tender hugs,
Juls

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