Open Poetry #9 |
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warm snow was melting... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA ![]() |
That night there was a full eclipse Warm snow was melting on her lips A scent of spring was in the air He said, “let’s go,” she asked him, “where?” They slowly wandered with no purpose Warm snow was melting on the surface He tightly held her shaking hand He said, “let’s kiss,” she asked him, “when?” Their lips have touched and frozen still Warm snow was melting on a hill Heart to a heart, eye to an eye He begged, “again!” she asked him, “why?” There was no purpose in it all Warm snow has melted in his soul In her, the snow turned into ice And she was melting in his eyes Check out my poetry here: http://cafepoetry.com/stage1/andrey_kneller.htm#My%20Hamlet |
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Terrific last three lines, Master and the way you constructed the lines with her questions in them was brilliant. The thoughts expressed were great.....hell, I just like the entire poem! |
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