Open Poetry #9 |
Poetry by Numbers |
wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
The all of mathematics meets and relaxes Pictured and framed though seems so abstract That all is relied on system of fact There lies some art, ten counts to the line With rhythm and meter accutely defined Points can be found; graphs can be made Resting on foci, a poem is laid Beautiful and sweet and purely from love Analyzed, critiqued by edits above But be bound by a law a physical system Ask a dead poet and surely you pissed 'em [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Love a last line laureate! as always Walt, more to this than meets the eye...extraordinaire.... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Your works always bring a smile to my face. All that number talk kind of confuses me though. I've never been good at them. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
another poem, another smile. You have a system of your own I take it. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh man...I LOVE clicking on your name...smiles a mile wide at this unique look at what we do. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx guys..too much college math and physics here and not enuff time for poetry |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh Walty ROTFLMAO!!!! What more to say? K |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx miss severn good to see yuhs |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
hey there walt beaut poem... counting the time till i get to read your next one. Loved it,,, specially the last line Linda Munday |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thanx linda yuh my next poem will be along the same lines but the time it takes to have time to write anything anymore is peethetic...im back in college tho yuh yuh |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
You are to much! I love seeing your name.....you have got to be one of the most refreshing poets around.........thanks again for all the smiles you bring to me. Jenn E |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
LOL.....really like this one Walt!!! |
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