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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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Simplicity  Awaken with memories resting in thought Stretch into the light of this day Love beating again..........within this......................morn as................................if all..............................can see..............................the one..........................and the.........................all of................my simplicity. Mark Bohannan [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
There's nothing simple about this one, Mark, it's lovely. And the ring looks great. Dee |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mark--You are SIMPLY great!!...and you made a butterfly smile and me too  .[This message has been edited by Martie (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a gift...a poet and an artist...and a cowboy and a....? Hummmm? |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smiling here too Mark ... simply lovely in both presentation and sentiments! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Wow, this is beautifull, I'm speachless with awe. This is so wonderful, thanks Mark, for the lift and the smile this brought.  |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
there is nothing simple about you creative presentation inspiring thoughts "simply" cool. "simply" YOU  my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Mark The ring was awesome. But there is nothing simple about this one. You know all the obligations that come with giving this ring. We should all hope that it could be as simple as falling in love and living happily ever after. But with that said, this was simply awesome as I mentioned earlier. Your artistic ability is simply outstanding. Garfield |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Holly-  Dee-Thank you so much and I am glad you liked it. Martie-Thank you so much my friend and now you have made me smile. Karilea-And a what my friend....hmmmm speak up...don't be shy....Thank you for saying all that you always say without saying it. Kit-Thank you very much and I am glad you found it lovely. Marge-You too??? well I don't believe that I have ever found you "completely" speechless before. Marsha-Anytime I can lift a fellow poet then it is my pleasure. shadow-I think you simply know me too well from that sis of yours.LOL...Thank you lil sis. Garfield-I thank you so much but let me assure you and everyone else...this is just a gift of poetry for all poets to share and nothing more....."or is it"????? Maybe the words alone will tell you. Yes, I believe they will. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this jewel of your heart shines divine needs to be seen under the stars *winkiewinkie* me |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wonderfully creative, Mark! I loved it! sp |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Mark o Mark.... You had me on edge of chair I wondered at first looking at screen if this was some encrypted poetic message (I was on webtv at that time just 2 clarify the point)... So I moved my lil toosh over to the computer and voila your artistic N poetic talents came thru the screen Holy jeepers you got it going... Dani |
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Trew Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Ottawa, Canada |
I am still unable to convey any discernable poetic image in under 500 words! A tip of the hat to you, Mark. This is a great piece. Visual and poetic beauty! Trev. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
simply irrisistible, sometimes simplicity is worth more than a thousand words, this was wonderful in words and format. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Mark.... What a beautiful piece you did for us here!! And you say you're not a teacher!! This is incredible, and a perfect format. Now I know I need to study harder!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very neat mark  i like this ..hugs, dg i'm growin' i dont like it i'm growin' and it hurts i love you but i'm tired i guess i've got a lot to learn -w. watson |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~Mark, Completely lovely....You are such a romantic man....*smile*....Thanks for sharing!!~ ~Cherie~ |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Mark So simply done so simply beautiful ~simplicity~ Well done Mark Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Jan-thank you my friend glad you liked it. But actually I think you just love and excuse to go play amongst the stars. snowpants -actually me too..thank you. Dani-yeppers...sometimes you just gotta get closer...thank you so much. Trev-thank you so much and so what is wrong with 500 words. Irresistable huh????? kinda like that one....thank you so much. Sunny1-Has anyone ever told you that your eyes....oh never mind.... I will bet you get told all the time anyway. Thank you so much dg-Thank you and glad you liked it Beth-why thank you my friend..so nice to see you poking your head in. Traci-Thank you so much for the moon...loved it. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! WOW! Beautiful poem, PERFECT presentation.....and yet another color from the pallet of Mark!! I gotta get me one of those pallets...let me tell ya........ Jenn E |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Jenn E-I do believe that they still have them in the main forums gift shop. Thank you so much for your enthusiasm |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, I have been behind the past day or so here.. but I'm glad I spotted this one I love the presentation! Wonderful as usual.  |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Wow Mark this is great. That ring shines almost as bright as you. Juls |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Mark~ This is a gem, it made me smile What a lovely thought and presentation - you have the power to make anything look beautiful!Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Very nice! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Add me to the list of admiration!!!! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
rp25-I thank you so much and do not worry....there are no time clocks here or Ron would be paying me a heck of alot of overtime pay.LOL....you take you time always and know that the same may happen to me but I am usually good at catching up. Thank you for you kind words. Juls-It is me belt buckle that sparkles so much as well as your comments to me in all you say. Thank you much Melissa-why thank you and I do believe that I will keep you around forever just to rub my ego each day. You do that so well and the book!!!!!! well, maybe okay? insect-thank you Balladeer-Thank you so much and would that be the list that goes to ALL the available women or the one that goes to LJA's fan club....NO members yet though.LOL |
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