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joy hester
Junior Member

since 2000-09-21

Posts 10

0 posted 2000-09-21 01:36 PM

Alone I sat,
in the corner of my mind,
counting the days;
wondering when it would happen.
Knowing it would,
seeing it come,
but helpless as I waited.
So I prayed
and I laughed
and I hoped.
But secretly alone
I patiently waited.
One day I almost
forgot to wait.
I walked around,
wondering in my mind
what was wrong?
Then I saw the light again.
And I sat alone---
waiting.
Until I didn't wait anymore.
And IT HAPPENED.
Now, again, alone I sit,
counting the days.
Wondering when it will happen.
Helpless.

Effigy
Member

since 2000-04-11

Posts 486
disbelief

1 posted 2000-09-21 01:40 PM

Welcome to passions. This is a great first post.

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

2 posted 2000-09-21 02:21 PM

Very interesting. Welcome to Passions.

So I prayed
and I laughed
and I hoped.
But secretly alone
I patiently waited.

I can't wait to read more. But I will.

Love is the law, love under will.

nando
Member

since 2000-06-09

Posts 87
Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden

3 posted 2000-09-21 03:09 PM

Joy

Welcome to us, hope you`ll like it here...

your poem was a very good read for me...I so agree with you, you wait and wait but nothing happens until you stop and forget the waiting for a while.
So the question is how do we stop waiting for the one when being loved is all we want...

-nando-

Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday...

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

4 posted 2000-09-21 03:34 PM

Joy, welcome to Passions, I'm sure you'll like it here.
Your entrance was great. It's true, when we stop waiting, that's when it happens.
Dee

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-09-21 04:27 PM

Joy~
Welcome to Passions.

'Alone I sat,
in the corner of my mind'

What a GREAT opening line -
wonderfully well done.
Hope you will enjoy being part of our family.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

6 posted 2000-09-21 04:43 PM

Joy
  I knew you had it in you.  I'm glad you posted this one. It is truly a remarkable first post.  Catchy title and the content was awesome.  Excellent read for me also.
  And here is a big W E L C O M E to Passions from me.
  See you tomorrow.

Garfield

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2000-09-21 07:10 PM

Welcome to Passions and may I also add to all of the above comments and say WHAT A WONDERFUL piece to start with.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

8 posted 2000-09-21 07:13 PM

i saw this earlier today when i was at work and was going to respond... but...

i forgot.

hehe

seriously, though... sincere thoughts and a good entry presentation! welcome!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

9 posted 2000-09-21 08:04 PM

Welcome, indeed - Passions is a wonderful place - You and your poetry will be very happy here... Check your email for a special greeting..

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