Open Poetry #9 |
amnesia |
joy hester Junior Member
since 2000-09-21
Posts 10 |
Alone I sat, in the corner of my mind, counting the days; wondering when it would happen. Knowing it would, seeing it come, but helpless as I waited. So I prayed and I laughed and I hoped. But secretly alone I patiently waited. One day I almost forgot to wait. I walked around, wondering in my mind what was wrong? Then I saw the light again. And I sat alone--- waiting. Until I didn't wait anymore. And IT HAPPENED. Now, again, alone I sit, counting the days. Wondering when it will happen. Helpless. |
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Effigy Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 486disbelief |
Welcome to passions. This is a great first post. |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Very interesting. Welcome to Passions. So I prayed and I laughed and I hoped. But secretly alone I patiently waited. I can't wait to read more. But I will. Love is the law, love under will. |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Joy Welcome to us, hope you`ll like it here... your poem was a very good read for me...I so agree with you, you wait and wait but nothing happens until you stop and forget the waiting for a while. So the question is how do we stop waiting for the one when being loved is all we want... -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Joy, welcome to Passions, I'm sure you'll like it here. Your entrance was great. It's true, when we stop waiting, that's when it happens. Dee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Joy~ Welcome to Passions. 'Alone I sat, in the corner of my mind' What a GREAT opening line - wonderfully well done. Hope you will enjoy being part of our family. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Joy I knew you had it in you. I'm glad you posted this one. It is truly a remarkable first post. Catchy title and the content was awesome. Excellent read for me also. And here is a big W E L C O M E to Passions from me. See you tomorrow. Garfield |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions and may I also add to all of the above comments and say WHAT A WONDERFUL piece to start with. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i saw this earlier today when i was at work and was going to respond... but... i forgot. hehe seriously, though... sincere thoughts and a good entry presentation! welcome! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Welcome, indeed - Passions is a wonderful place - You and your poetry will be very happy here... Check your email for a special greeting.. |
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