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A Heart Can See The Sunshine
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A Heart Can See The Sunshine |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
A Heart Can See the Sunshine She walks in darkness Tiptoes on glass Touches the fire Does it all with such class She swims against the current Flies against the wind Rides against the tide Focused to no end Cherishing every rainbow Making jewels of every star Bathing in the light from every crevice An optimist by far She follows her heart Making music where there’s none Scarring herself along the way Quickly healing them one by one A butterfly full of hope No matter how hard the flight Seeing through the storm clouds A sun that’s still shining bright Mistakes she knows not any They’re all experiences of some kind A heart will always stay happy With the help of a healing mind |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a beautiful verse of warmth. You have penned one that will forever shine. Not sure who she is but she has evidently touched you deeply and you honor her well. Could easily be for you as WE see you. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey, you knew the title would drag me in...and I like the message as well... job well done, Kat... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
What a lovely tribute to the one who holds these beautiful and positive traits! Very nicely penned Kat!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Mark: You're so sweet! Thanks so much for that. I'm glad you liked it. Sunshine: Actually I had no clue it would draw you here but now come to think of it..not such a bad idea. Maybe I'll make my next title.."Some Of Your Names Are Not In My Poem". Hmmmmmm..I wonder how many I can get in with that one??..LOL  Glad you liked it. Thanks! kat |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Kit: Wow! you sneaked right past me..lol. Thanks so much for that. I'm glad you enjoyed it! kat |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kat, with that title, you'll drag 'em all in... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Sunshine: Ya think??? Well now..I guess I better get started on that poem quick. LOL  kat |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
A heart can see the sunshine, each word warms the heart, such beauty here, I loved every line. Sunshine within the heart! |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
Kat So true, a healing mind can make wonders... Loved this, I`m feeling kinda sad right now so this gave me some positive thoughts... Thanx -nando- Ask me how to live your life, and this to you I´ll say: make your choises true and wise, so that when tomorrow will arise, you´ll smile at yesterday... |
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kat Member
since 2000-05-20
Posts 387 |
Rosebud: I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. Thanks! Nando: I'm so glad it had that affect on you. I'm always happy when my poetry touches someone like that. Thanks so much! Hope everything goes well for you. kat |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
A ray is the heat of you My feet are running to you My temperature is rising My heart is realizing It beats a purrfect beat Always landing on my feet When your rays reach my skin I'm running a race to win I'm running to your sun A place of smiles and fun I love to feel your rays A warmth to heat my cold days ___________________________ Shine on my feline  |
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