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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
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australia

0 posted 2000-09-21 05:12 AM


I made a wish........

I wished with all my might........

My wish became a dream.........

A dream inside my heart........

A heart that longed to be held........

Held high above all other hearts........

Held high above with a love so strong......

A love so strong to make the wish come true........

I made a wish......that wish is you.......


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English Rose
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since 2000-08-20
Posts 211
Berkshire, England
1 posted 2000-09-21 05:15 AM


Hello!

What a lovely subject!....we all have a wish like that somewhere inside I am sure.
Did you notice that the shape of your words looks rather like a tree?...a tree of life perhaps??

Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
2 posted 2000-09-21 06:31 AM


Wishes and dreams make life so much more fun, I think. Lovely poem.
Dee

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-21 07:34 AM


Turning the wishes into the reality of our dreams may not always be easy but they are so very sweet when we do.  Very nice read.
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