Open Poetry #9 |
If I were going to need you |
Michat New Member
since 2000-09-21
Posts 3 |
If I were going to need you Be the touch of fingertip Igniting passionate fires Be the everlasting kiss Soaring spirits high Be the love divine and true Embracing heart a coveted jewel Be the mind of reason Guiding when bewildered and confused Be the eyes of compassion Penetrating beneath surface seeing beauty everlasting Be the friend understand and accept Growing together having no regrets. [This message has been edited by Michat (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Michat, welcome to passions, if I were going to need you, it would be through your beautiful poetry. Be well Kethry |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is a lovely piece - Welcome to Passions - It's a wonderful place where those who need and offer friendship abound - Check your email for a special greeting.. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Welcome to Passions and answering a challenge on your first post.....what a brave one you are. Wonderful job in doing so I might add. Great write. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-21-2000).] |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Well... I must say I have read this several times and enjoyed it each time....just Be and continue writing for all to enjoy...we need such beautiful thoughts in our lives.... ~~soft smiles and Welcome Maureen |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Michat, Welcome to Passions. I know you'll like it here, everyone else does! What a lovely poem to start with. Dee |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
Hello there, Welcome to Passions in Poetry. This is a truly lovely poem... and I think you have met the challenge very well. And if this is a small sample of your work, then we are all in for a treat or two in the future. Linda Munday |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW! Welcome, welcome, welcome!! You touched upon the mood of the challenge nicely. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WOW! Welcome, welcome, welcome!! You touched upon the mood of the challenge nicely. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
well done and welcome! Corinne |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Nicely done with your first challenge, I really like the format! Welcome to passions, may you grow to love it here as much as I do! Debbie |
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