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Open Poetry #9

Love's Lambada Tanka

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2000-09-20 01:47 PM

~LOVE'S LAMBADA TANKA~

5-7-5-7-7

All night lambada
electric touch upon fiery skin
service me splendour
taste and explore my essence
bodies entwined create love

*By Melissa Honeybee*

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

1 posted 2000-09-20 01:51 PM

Ooh la la .. this sensual dance flowed into your words perfectly, nicely penned Melissa!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

2 posted 2000-09-20 02:07 PM

Melissa, girl you give good tanka....

Parker

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2000-09-20 02:34 PM

Dancing through with heartfelt smiles. Beautifully penned.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-09-21 08:22 AM

Tanks for the tanka,
that's one style I'm going to have to play with.
Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

5 posted 2000-09-21 08:55 AM

Melissa,

I just looooove tankas

And I like this sensual poem.

rp25

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