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CAMERON UNDERWOOD
Junior Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 26

0 posted 2000-09-20 12:05 PM

Broken

Sometimes it's not what you see, or even what you feel in right to be.
Open your mind to let your heart go free.
Soulmates to find and hearts to break.
Sometimes they'll be your own; or other you take.
Like a dagger through the heart I know the pain.
Can my heart suffer this death again?
It becomes harder every time I try.
My heart cut to pieces again, and I ask myself why?
Here I sit with this pain and sorrow.
My heart feels so empty;..broken and hollow.

jlocke
Member

since 2000-09-10

Posts 169
CC,TX

1 posted 2000-09-20 12:42 PM

My heart feels so empty;..broken and hollow.
I know that feeling too well.
Welcome to Passions.

Love is the law, love under will.

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-09-20 12:47 PM

Welcome to Passions Cameron! You've expressed your heartache well in this first post ... I hope all heals in time, and look forward to reading more of your work!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

3 posted 2000-09-20 05:15 PM

Cameron, I too can relate to your words, as you to mine. My heart goes out to you. Don't give up, there has to be something better out there.
Again, welcome to this wonderful place.
Dee

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2000-09-20 05:30 PM

Cameron,
welcome to passions.
*HUGS* to you. Powerful write.
Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2000-09-20 05:46 PM

"My heart cut to pieces again and I ask myself why?"
The opportunity to feel Love outweighs the risk of failure...doesn't seem like it was worth it when the end result is a broken heart...James

Parker
Member Elite

since 2000-01-06

Posts 3129
ON

6 posted 2000-09-20 06:09 PM

Cameron, welcome and a very nice first piece.

Parker

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2000-09-20 07:02 PM

Welcome to Passions!!!! Wonderful though painful first write. Look forward to seeing more of you.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2000-09-20 08:21 PM

That heartbreak...one of life's greatest lessons...but don't let it keep you from love...and welcome to Passions!

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

9 posted 2000-09-20 08:26 PM

Cameron,

Welcome to Passions!! Very nice first post. Such sad sentiment here. Hang in there . . . somewhere out there is the one for you. Good writing. Looking forward to reading more of your work.

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

10 posted 2000-09-20 10:12 PM

Cameron...I have been waiting for this...welcome to Passions and with such an emotional pst at that...terrific

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2000-09-21 07:59 AM

Bumping you so as to let you mingle among the poets a bit.

CAMERON UNDERWOOD
Junior Member

since 2000-08-31

Posts 26

12 posted 2000-09-21 12:07 PM

jlocke, Kit, Dee, Kethry, jmlee12345, Haleyja, Mark, Martie, Lone Wolf, Paula

I love you all, and I thank you so very much for such a warm welcome.

I feel very at home with all of you as my new found friends on Passions.

I may may need a shoulder or two for a while.
As my girlfriend broke up with me on easter. Its getting better, but it's not easy by no means. She was one of the best loves of my life.

Thank you very much too all of you.

And to all of you; I hope all of your hopes and dreams come true.

Sleepless in Portland

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

13 posted 2000-09-21 12:52 PM

Hi Cameron....
And welcome to Passions!! I like this first post, and life is sometimes full of pain, unfortunately. You did a great job of writing here, and I hope to see more!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

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