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Open Poetry #9

In The Field's Prime

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-19 11:58 PM

I'm not sure if I should have placed this in the Adult Forum. If so, please excuse.

In The Field's Prime

Prime acreage sprawls bare, fertility
evident by her cultivated rows exposed,
spread broad in wanton abandon,
to be absorbed with seed’s potency.
Dry trench in lush yearn eagerly awaits
the sate from swollen clouds to spike,
sun’s beam to stir with vigilant endurance
until new life is conceived.

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Masked Intruder

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Senior Member

since 1999-05-23

Posts 1231
Near golden sunsets

1 posted 2000-09-20 02:46 PM

The metaphor was good enough to be in public viewing I think....But I wouldn't know anything about that. *grins*
Wonderful!

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2000-09-20 02:54 PM

Hello Masked Intruder

It really is about a field...uhuh it is...really. *chuckle*
And thank you....you may intrude into my poems whenever you want

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

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