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Tipadilly Tatoo
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Tipadilly Tatoo |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209
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ok, another no need to comment one.....antivenum of a different sort Tipadilly tatoo my shoes scattered and skipped through the tall green grass my head far up in the clouds I was lost to the day until I happened upon an mystical sign to the left of my intended path Tipadilly Tatoo I could not help myself as in I went and took a seat he placed his books of desire in my hands and I paged and paged but to no avail my heart’s desire was not in his magic realm Tipadilly tired of waiting and questioned of me what lies here? and he gestured over my heart and a slow smile spread as I pulled out a picture of you and he sighed, This one? he is your heart's desire? I nodded and bared my heart I closed my eyes expecting the pain but soft was his touch as indelibly he inked my heart I left my feet barely grazing the grass tips, I glanced back and was not surprised naught but an empty woods but my heart beating much too hard feeling twice its size and very warm was evidence enough to know that you have forever been written into my heart |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Maybe there's no NEED to comment but I'm gonna anyway....it think it's excellent writing....so sue me! |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: excellent writing, girl! wow!  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Corazon--I liked this very much, I did.... surreal, mystical, romantic is my non comment. |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
ok I know bringing up the dead, but I forgot about this one, and wanted to say thanks for your non comments, you are all sweet |
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