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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Unconditional I sit here with wonder At the love I hold inside For twenty six years I have waited and hoped For a love like yours An unconditional love That fills me so completely A love that carries me To a beautiful place Found only in my dreams. A place where I can be me No need to wear a mask You make happy to be me Something nobody has ever Been able to accomplish You know my thoughts You know my heart You know my desires You make me a better person You make me whole For all these reason and So many many more I give my heart, my soul And all my love to you Completely, absolutely, And unconditional For as long as breath escapes me I want your beautiful presence Standing by me Giving me strength Filling me with warmth and love. [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
And may your unconditional rise each morn into the next life as well. Very sweetly penned and yeppers I would say that it sounds unconditional under the condition that it is truely unconditional.   |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark - Well! I read your response 3 times..lol. It is absolutely truely unconditional Thank you for stopping in. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
If you have found what you describe here, you are indeed blessed. It's what everyone hopes to find... very very nicely written...... |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Ball - I honestly believe I have found it. I can only pray that it lasts forever Thank you for your kind words and for stopping in. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RosePetals~ To be touched by a love so tender that it causes your heart to surrender is a blessing of love sent from Heaven above. I am so pleased for your happiness. Nicely expressed, dear lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Marge - I couldn't agree with you more He is my angel. Thank you for your nice words |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful words of love and devotion Rosepetals ... so genuinely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Kit - Thank you for nice words I'm happy you stopped in. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"A place where I can be me." I am looking for this love...a woman that will tell me you know what James you are a pretty neat guy...and I like you exactly the way you are...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
BRAVO!!! This is wonderful. . . it says it all. . .we all search for a love like this. . . yet, so few find it. . . From the heart my friend. . . Excellent!! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James - Like I said in the poem.. I have waited 26 years for it.. but it is well worth it I know you too will find.. who could not love a heart like yours Sven - Thank you Sven I'm glad to see you stopped in BTW... are you ever going on icq again?  You know I had to ask  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
James - Like I said in the poem.. I have waited 26 years for it.. but it is well worth it I know you too will find.. who could not love a heart like yours Sven - Thank you Sven I'm glad to see you stopped in BTW... are you ever going on icq again? You know I had to ask |
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