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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA 
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In the dead of the night The voices within Continue to scream in my mind Incredibly confused And not understanding No pity from them will I find They tell me things And control my thoughts I lose all self-control Trying to sleep My thoughts start to wonder My mind begins to slow Beads of sweat Flow down my brow As my heads caves slowly in My eye's closed tight Hands over my ears As the voices slowly win Better to die, and sleep The never-waking sleep, than linger on And dare to live when the souls life is gone. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well written! Denise |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
And once again, thank you for replying. Better to die, and sleep The never-waking sleep, than linger on And dare to live when the souls life is gone. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Very enjoyable piece! Eery almost! Great job!  --You can either take me as I am...or you can watch me as I go.-- |
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trevorskogsbergh Member
since 2000-02-03
Posts 129South Pasadena, CA |
Thanks for the criticism. Trevor Better to die, and sleep The never-waking sleep, than linger on And dare to live when the souls life is gone. |
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