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allan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 620
On the road

0 posted 2000-08-03 03:29 PM

I
too
think
serious
thoughts
concerning
existence
living
love
and
so
I
will
start
making
sensible
suggestions
sometime
within
these
bits
of
I
If
you
like
these
wiggly
notions
applause
finally
comes
from
sad
I
to
you
with
lovely
greetings
gratefully
transferred
electrically
beautifully
mindfully
solemnly
simply
given
free
me
I
to
you

with
smiles

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2000-08-03 03:45 PM

Allan
This is a wonderful format with some lovely well-meaning words in it....

A delightful visual indeed...

regards,
sudhir

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-08-03 03:53 PM

I
like
it
!

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-08-03 04:59 PM

and I love it, applause, applause, applause!

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

4 posted 2000-08-03 05:15 PM

Allan, this is quite an attention~getting message and format...nicely done.

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2000-08-07 02:47 AM

Allan~

Ah
You
Got me
Liked it
A whole lot
Well, at least
I think I liked it
Yeah, I know I liked it
Because if I didn't like it
I'd quit doing this silly display
And go straight to my bed of slumber

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

lotharingia
Senior Member

since 2000-06-04

Posts 897
saarbruecken, Germany

6 posted 2000-08-09 02:03 PM

allan,
this is so terribly sweet!
And I loved the ondulations!

Lotharingia
"Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo

Yu Lan
Senior Member

since 2000-04-13

Posts 1462
New Zealand

7 posted 2000-08-11 04:35 AM

Hehe, nice form, allan. ^_^ imeyou.. I like it..

-Lynne

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

8 posted 2000-09-10 07:27 PM

Allan,

A captivating poem in expression as well as your presentation.

A very enjoyable read!

Coco

[This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 09-10-2000).]

Alle'cram
Senior Member

since 2000-02-28

Posts 1816
Texas

9 posted 2000-09-10 07:43 PM

A
p
  p
   l
    a
     u
      s
       e
      f
     r
    o
   m
  m
e
t
o
  y
   o
    u
     !
      !

ddgoose
Member

since 2000-07-25

Posts 250
Baltimore, MD, USA

10 posted 2000-09-10 07:47 PM

Allan

You got my attention with format as well as content.

                 I
                like
                 it
                 too!

didi

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

11 posted 2000-09-10 07:47 PM

kewl!!!!

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