Open Poetry #9 |
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allan Senior Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 620On the road ![]() |
I too think serious thoughts concerning existence living love and so I will start making sensible suggestions sometime within these bits of I If you like these wiggly notions applause finally comes from sad I to you with lovely greetings gratefully transferred electrically beautifully mindfully solemnly simply given free me I to you with smiles ![]() |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Allan This is a wonderful format with some lovely well-meaning words in it.... A delightful visual indeed... regards, sudhir |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like it ! Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and I love it, applause, applause, applause! |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Allan, this is quite an attention~getting message and format...nicely done. ![]() ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Allan~ Ah You Got me Liked it A whole lot Well, at least I think I liked it Yeah, I know I liked it Because if I didn't like it I'd quit doing this silly display And go straight to my bed of slumber ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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lotharingia Senior Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 897saarbruecken, Germany |
allan, this is so terribly sweet! And I loved the ondulations! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Lotharingia "Dreams are life, reality, creation" Miguel de Unanumo |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
Hehe, nice form, allan. ^_^ imeyou.. I like it.. -Lynne |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Allan, A captivating poem in expression as well as your presentation. A very enjoyable read! ![]() ![]() [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 09-10-2000).] |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
A p p l a u s e f r o m m e t o y o u ! ! ![]() |
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ddgoose Member
since 2000-07-25
Posts 250Baltimore, MD, USA |
Allan You got my attention with format as well as content. I like it too! didi |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
kewl!!!! ![]() |
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