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Richard Brooks Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 17Richardson, TX |
reflect and we see flirt and we taste burn and we smell whisper and we hear touch and we feel eyes that reflect see the flame hearts that flirt taste the desire passions that burn LOVE smell the scent voices that whisper hear the poetry hands that touch feel the caress flame of our eyes desire of our hearts scent of our passions poetry of our voices caress of our hands |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
awwwww.... how precious! this is lovely!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RichardB~ This contains lovely, lovely thoughts. It is also quite masterfully well-done in the presentation. *Applauding* here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Applauding with Marge and bowing as well. Lovely sentiments and wrapped so eloquently by you for presentation. BTW---Welcome to Passions and look forward to reading more of your works |
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Richard Brooks Junior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 17Richardson, TX |
Doreen, Marge, and Mark Thank you. Sometimes presentation is just as important as prose. In time I'll improve both. Thanks again for your encouragement. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Richard, Wonderful presentation on this one. Love is all this and so much more. Great job!! Welcome to Passions!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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