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The Storm and The Ocean
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The Storm and The Ocean |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
The Storm and the Ocean "Senryu's" Thunder Storms were then, Though now the spatters seem thin, Still they flood my heart. Unrelenting waves, Pounding mountains into sand, Love still in the grains. James Parker Haley Sept 19, 2000. [This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Juls |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Parker, I loved every single word. Perfectly Pleasing! I like how you think.....and how you have said so much with so few words. I love all the sides you behold as a poet as well as your "uniquness" (I am not sure if that is a word...lol)......Take Care  Jenn E |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
sincere and honest emotions here p-man... I think I know where these come from ... if we can look back without regret and remember the lessons learned ... we can let go of the losses and hold on to the memories. Love the metaphors you used in these little gems of poetry. but then I love when ever you do multiples  later-sweet-senyru-gator me ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ Looking back in time Memories etched in our minds Engraved on our hearts ~*~ ~*~ ~*~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Juls, thank you... but don't we all have many sides... just look into my older poetry on the site and you will see all of me... Jenn E, your too sweet with your words. thank you. ah, brown eye's thank you. the heart has memories wonderful and sad... they are who we are. Parker |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very good, Parker! I love them! Denise |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Beautiful Parker...for a man of many words you know how to keep it short and sweet as well ....very beautiful! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
How lovely, and you know I like those grains! Corinne |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Very nice James. You are really very good at these Haiku's and Senyu's. Nice to see you have your muse back........ Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Parker,...so very nice to read you, I think I'll go back and do that again. This is wonderful writing. Take care of you. *Peace. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
WOW..parker, youve said so much in such a small space.. "though now the spatters seem thin..." "pounding mountains into sand..." time makes the big things seem less big aye..and in the end we find that love was there somewhere..perhaps still is.. absolutely wonderful, parker..loved every word hugs, dg< !signature--> "i'm growin'/ i dont like it/ i'm growin' and it hurts/ i love you/ but i'm tired/ i guess i've got a lot to learn..." -w. watson [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 09-20-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Parker~ These are wonderful thought-depicting Senryu's. You continue to grow, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
Very good stormy visuals. Enjoyed ...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. -Song of Gesture |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
I love the sea....and this was beautiful Parker ~Heather |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Storm resides in heart As light of love passes through calmness taking hold  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Denise, thank you very much. Butterflies, thank you. Corinne....... Marina, well, I think I'm not quite back. Thanks anyway. SpitFire, come back and do me anytime... dg, thank you sweets. hugs back at ya. Marge, thank you very very much. chansondegeste, thank you for replying. Heather, yes the sea can be very enticing. Mark, great pic and Senryu. I think I'll put that on my wallpaper. thanks. Parker |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
wow so simply you speak so effectively to the heart good to have time to read you again my friend |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Corazon, come and read me anytime. Thank you.Parker |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi parker...what wonder you have written so beautifully...thank you! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I set the picture for my wallpaper too! Very beautiful! Thanks, Mark! Denise |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OOHHHH Parker...what lovely imagery...I love the ocean and storms |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Martie, thank you very much. Denise, it looks great even stretched.. Paula, ever kiss in the warm rain.... oh... Parker |
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