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On Wings Of Touch
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On Wings Of Touch |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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On Wings Of Touch so calm the air of early morn refreshed, one feels the sing of sweetened life, as birds let fly their voices gentle ring a sigh escapes these lips of mine my breasts they rise and fall when taking in this freshened air and thoughts are pleasant, all as voices heard, come visit me and heart of mine does leaps and bounds I go in circles, whirling awakening what sleeps such pleasant feelings are evoked thought kisses, eyes and voice am wondering if one had to do could I have made a choice if leaving out just one of them could I make it through my day thought kisses ... hmmmm won't give them up they taste so good ... must stay and touching eyes ... well in my view I love to feel their gaze no way could I dismiss these feels my temp, they always raise and touches felt by voice, oh my they send me to the sky each moment spent with words I hear I ~~sigh, I ~~sigh, I ~~sigh so now you know what I know, too impossible for me to separate and leave behind any touches of these three so calm the air this early morn refreshed, I now can sing of sweetened life, as birds do I and fly now on these wings ... Maureen (*99) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Maureen - This is like medicine for the soul. It is so good to see you writing of life and being upbeat. The poetry is very well done, too. But its's the message that brings a song to my heart. It truly is good to see your smile. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi MMoonchild, I send with love one very rare magnificent red rose and may the early morn dew kiss it just for you. Beautifully written poetry my friend so very mush enjoyed. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Long John..I do try to be upbeat really..it's just a very tiring situation I am going through and I believe now it will be dragged out and I know we will both be worn down from it and have both good and bad days..trying so hard not to be influenced by others and wanting to remain friends ~~soft thanks Maureen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow this one just reaches out and hugs you, which is just what I needed, beautiful piece. The softest thing in the world Will overcome the hardest.Non-being can enter where there is no space". Taoist saying |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This is a wonderfully crafted verse Maureen, such a wonderful flow combined with these lovely sentiments ... very nicely done!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Cerenity a very beautiful thought sent and am sending you one back @}}--}--~ with hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
brian I always have hugs to share anytime thank you for stopping by ~~soft hugs Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Kit it makes me happpy when you can receive a touch of enjoyment from my words thank you ~~soft smiles Maureen [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 09-19-2000).] |
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