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Open Poetry #9

Midnight Moon

Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27

Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 2000-09-19 08:28 AM

They walk the sandy beaches,
Their hands are entwined.
Their hearts beating in harmony.
They will cross a forbidden line.
Under the cover of darkness,
They are where they yearn to be.
Just for tonight they do not care,
That one of them's not free.
They whisper of their love and desire,
Then slip behind a private dune.
And as they melt within each others arms,
No one sees but the might night moon.

Copyright ©2000 Kitty Sandridge

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If you can't make it so,
you need to let it go!

[This message has been edited by Kitty** (edited 09-19-2000).]

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2000-09-19 09:46 AM

Kitty, that was beautiful. I could see the whole scene you described and feel their love and longing. Great work.

Elizabeth

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

2 posted 2000-09-19 09:48 AM

Kitty! Bad Kitty. I suspect you've been longing for a bigger sand box. I love the flow of this poem, and the complexities you added in without fanfare.

WhiteNite
Member

since 2000-04-09

Posts 241
Montgomery, AL

3 posted 2000-09-20 10:32 PM

I've crossed a few forbidden lines, but not that one. I almost feel like I've experiened it through your poem though. Great read. Thanks.

I wear my heart on my sleeve to show the emotions that I can't express with words. --Dave

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