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Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

0 posted 2000-09-19 07:52 AM

I believe this was the second poem I wrote - some time ago - and I don't think I've ever posted it...

SERENADES

Trill, the Silk-Tailed Warbler sings
Serenades from lofty wings.
Erudite, astute, and wise,
Sees through perspicacious eyes.
Debonair and jovial,
Winsome plumes adorn his soul.
Gilded bevies entreat love
Thither nestles ONE fair dove.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-19 07:55 AM

So glad you decided to post it today. lovely verse it is and sings to the soul this morning.

Thank you for sharing it.

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

2 posted 2000-09-19 07:57 AM

How beautiful, Nan. This was your second poem, boy have I got a long way to go!
Dee

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2000-09-19 08:02 AM

Nan,
this is beautiful, it brightened my evening.
Be well
Kethry

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-09-19 09:31 AM

loved the animation..and the poem nan..

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2000-09-19 09:42 AM

Nan,
Love your poem, love your mind, Love you. Sy

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2000-09-19 09:45 AM

A home run on your second time at bat? *G* This is great!

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2000-09-19 10:10 AM

There's no way my early poetry was (and may never be) as good as this early efort of yours IS!
(Needless to say I love the picture too and wonder if you've taken the pictures I'm viewing yourself)

I sincerely hope you continue in this vein
your work is most appreciated.

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2000-09-19 07:45 PM

Thanks all...

Mark - Glad you liked it - I've never been partial to it, I guess - that's probably why it's not been posted before...Thanks..

Dee - Thanks - and we're always our own worst critics... Don't underestimate your talent..

Kethry - Nice to have you stop by and enjoy - I'm glad I could contribute to your smile..

Victoria - My humble thanks to you as well..

Sy - Likewise - on all counts..

suthern - funny thing is - I keep trying to outdo my first work - I don't think I've done it yet...

Wil - I have to confess - I was teaching poetry before I ever started writing it.. and yes, I did take the pictures - from free graphics sites online... and it's nice to be appreciated.. Thanks..

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