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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-18 07:48 AM

Clear, icy cold water, its soft, passive rippling
creating small splashes and droplets trickling
over stones smoothed by currents of time passing.
And as it flows, so go problems and strife
washed gently away, removed from this life.
The misty remains of rapt, cool waves reviving
a spirit too long pulled away from the dancing
to life's refreshing magic of cool waters streaming.

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-09-18 10:13 AM

This was peaceful and musical--I could hear every trickle...nice way to start my day...

Thank you!

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

2 posted 2000-09-18 11:44 AM

I hope it's not too trite to say this 'flows'
because for me it does - beautifully. both with the words and the thoughts.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

3 posted 2000-09-18 12:29 PM

serenity, I'm glad it was a nice wake up call. Thanks muchly for reading and enjoying.

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

4 posted 2000-09-18 12:32 PM

Wil, your words are never trite. You caught the feel and the flow.....I couldn't be happier

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

ggrn3
Member

since 2000-08-17

Posts 433
Nahunta Georgia U.S.

5 posted 2000-09-18 01:10 PM

Chanson D.

This was great. I loved the imagery in this one.
Excellent work.

Garfield

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2000-09-18 02:24 PM

Garfield, it's very thoughtful of you to stop in and leave a word or two.
Muchly appreciated and happy you enjoyed the picture

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

7 posted 2000-09-18 02:35 PM

chanson...
You have painted such a peaceful scene here, that I feel like sitting by a stream to wash all the cares away. I love your writing.....it soothes the spirit!!

Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

8 posted 2000-09-18 04:34 PM

I wrote this two years ago by a stream, my inspiration I suppose.
Your responses are always appreciated, Sunny!!!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

9 posted 2000-09-18 04:42 PM

Now I feel so refreshed. Thank you for such a beautiful setting for this day.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

10 posted 2000-09-18 04:59 PM

I'm glad to offer the respite and you enjoyed the peacefulness, Mark. Thank you

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

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