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Wilfred Yeats
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Wilmington, Delaware

0 posted 2000-09-18 12:12 PM



I choose to taste you undisguised.
No flavored scent to tell me lies
Draw nectar from your honeyed lips
Unrefined in slow sweet sips
Breath natural perfume from your sighs
From soft sweet flesh between your thighs
Lick perspiration; hear your cries
Taste fully as your passion flies
Unadorned, without decoration
Could spend all my life live in your nation
Tasting you, kissing you, no hesitation
It's all I need, fill me with elation
So come and fill my cup with honey
Loving you is worth more than money



~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

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snowpants
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1 posted 2000-09-18 12:15 PM


"Tasting you, kissing you, no hesitation
It's all I need, fill me with elation"

Wonderfully written!!  I loved it!  

sp

Wilfred Yeats
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2 posted 2000-09-18 10:53 AM


Snowpants-

Thank you - I'm working on another hat trick


~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

Paula Finn
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missouri
3 posted 2000-09-21 03:35 PM


Ah my friend...what erotic dreams you have given me...glad I could bring this back up where it belongs
Dee
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Queensland, Australia
4 posted 2000-09-21 03:59 PM


Wilfred, such sweet words. Excuse me while I open a window, its getting warm in here.
Dee


[This message has been edited by Dee (edited 09-21-2000).]

Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-09-21 04:17 PM


Mr. Yeats!...whew!
Wilfred Yeats
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6 posted 2000-09-22 10:01 AM


Paula-

If I contribute to good dreams for you
I must be writing something you like - thank you  

Dee-

Its MY tastebuds - finding the Sweet not these humble words - Thank you  

Ms Karilea

I keep telling you I'm

Bill  (thank you    )


~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

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