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Sven
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0 posted 2000-09-16 10:07 PM


"She feels too much" some people would say
Sometimes, it's all she can do
                         to get through the day
But wherever a soul is troubled, or a heart is in need
She holds up the light and
                         proves to be a true friend indeed

The pain, sometimes, can take a heavy toll
Sometimes, she really wonders
                         if her heart will ever be whole
Her body showing the ravages of the pain
May never ever in this life
                         be healed ever again

She prays at night to not drink from that cup
But daily it is served to her
                         sometimes she is forced to sup
The beast rules her life, so it would seem
She wonders if the happiness she seeks
                         is only just a dream

Come and be healed, gentle empath
Lay your pain at the feet of one
                         who also practices the craft
He will heal your pain and give you reason to live
So that you may keep being a light to others
                         and still have a heart to give

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Temptress
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1 posted 2000-09-16 10:21 PM


Wow.   I enjoyed this poem. It was sad with a touch of hope at the end.  
A familiar feeling.


Nothing can deter a poet, for he is actuated by pure love. Who can predict his comings and goings? "Thoreau"


Temptress
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2 posted 2000-09-17 01:51 AM


Can't have anyone missing this one.
Back up to the top with ya !

tracie66
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3 posted 2000-09-17 02:58 AM


Oh Sven
You never cease to amaze me with your words and your heart  
Here's to you *Sacred Heart*
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


juliet_2u
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4 posted 2000-09-17 08:25 AM


Sven this is so caring and warm. Those of us who know you as friend are indeed the fortunate ones. Beautiful labor of love my friend.
Juls

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2000-09-17 08:29 AM


Sven,
An eloquent poem, enjoyed.

Beth
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6 posted 2000-09-17 08:31 AM


~Sven..
      Your talents surprise me more and more with every post...You are such a gifted man!!~
  


~Cherie~

Sven
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7 posted 2000-09-17 03:31 PM


Thank you all so much my friends. . .

Temptress. . . thank you. . . twice!!  

Tracie, thank you so much my friend. . .

Juls. . . no, I am the fortunate for having all of you as my friends. . .

Sy, thank you my friend. . . glad that you stopped by. . .

Beth, thank you. . . your words mean a lot. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


jlocke
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8 posted 2000-09-17 07:33 PM


I have never read anything as beautiful as this.  I've been trying to find these very words for another practitioner of "the craft".  I would love to share this masterpiece with her.  With your permission, of course.
This one brought a tear to my eye.
Thank you.

Love is the law, love under will.



Isis
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9 posted 2000-09-17 09:11 PM


Sven I loved it in dark when you wrote it for me, and it was a joy to mosey over to open and see it again.  I still love it and so glad you shared it with open too, for it is definitely worth sharing.
Namaste between too similar empaths and spirits.. *hugs*
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



Isis
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10 posted 2000-09-17 09:11 PM


Sven I loved it in dark when you wrote it for me, and it was a joy to mosey over to open and see it again.  I still love it and so glad you shared it with open too, for it is definitely worth sharing.
Namaste between too similar empaths and spirits.. *hugs*
Isis

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



Sven
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11 posted 2000-09-18 12:38 PM


jlocke, thank you. . . I am glad that these words touched you. . . please share this with your friend, and know that there are others of us who, as empaths, share ourselves and our "craft" with the world. . .

Isis, thank you my friend. . . I know that you and I share this feeling. . . and I thought that it would be a wonderful poem to share with everyone here. . .

Empaths are very interesting people. . . perhaps you know one. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Isis
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12 posted 2000-09-19 08:36 PM


Actually I know two!!  

*Friendship is a horizon - which expands whenever we approach it...*
~Isis~Goddess~~Sovereign of the Spirit~



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