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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2000-09-16 07:00 PM


When I am in need
And I’ve lost my way

You are there

When I think that I’m alone
And there is no where to turn

You are there

When I need to yell
Let the turmoil rage

You are there

When I need to cry
And feel broken inside

You are there

When I need comfort
A reassuring whisper

You are there

I know in my heart
When I need love

You are there.

And I wish I had the words
To let you know how thankful I am that

You are there.


I wrote this for my close friend Aidan.  Without him I would be lost.





[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-16-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Wilfred Yeats
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1 posted 2000-09-16 07:47 PM


Such a friend - is a pearl beyond price - treasure your friend - ~S~
rosepetals25
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2 posted 2000-09-16 07:55 PM


Wifred - Thank you for stopping in.  I must apologize however..lol. I know there was an error when you read it.. I tried to correct but my browser wasn't cooperating with me
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3 posted 2002-01-18 03:55 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Tara, we are all so happy to have such a loving friend like you deep in our hearts! (kiss on cheek) I just know Aidan will always cherish this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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4 posted 2002-07-08 05:48 PM


Its wonderful to have friends like this, isn't it?

lovely poem

I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-01-13 02:51 AM


a good friend
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