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Of Being a Warrior in Time-Part Four
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Of Being a Warrior in Time-Part Four |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
Finding Grace Midnight tolls its solemn verse of blessed virgins that roam Come quick this hollow night for my blood does run thin What angels have left their stain upon this torn desolate land I find solice in their wake and clammor my past ill. Oh but one tempts my soul as lust and vigilance take command Features of the sleakest of cats eyes that could break my will A temperate smile that hides her shade a color most likely to be devine Angelic hands blaze my heart as death becomes my tired soul. Centuries gained and given hence now my fate comes kissing me My battles fought and won with grace she makes lost love to me Finnally I have the peace I sought which I lost for heavens grace And shall lay here in her arms till the sunrise comes to take me. |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Michael, I am wondering how this made it to page two with no one seeing it. I think this is very interesting, and without knowing the whole story of parts 1-3, it stands alone. "Centuries gained and given hence now my fate comes kissing me My battles fought and won with grace she makes lost love to me Those words especially touched me. Catalinamoon |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
A temperate smile that hides her shade a color most likely to be devine Angelic hands blaze my heart as death becomes my tired soul. Centuries gained and given hence now my fate comes kissing me My battles fought and won with grace she makes lost love to me Finnally I have the peace I sought which I lost for heavens grace And shall lay here in her arms till the sunrise comes to take me. ================= i do so love the way your poetic mind works.. and your heart aint so bad either  love this whole series me |
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