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Never Let it Fade Away
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Never Let it Fade Away |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Her cheeks like rosy red apples, Her eyes a deep emerald green, Long golden curls are surrounding The most precious face ever seen. Dressed in a gown of soft flannel, In her small hand she's holding a dove, A halo of delicate rosebuds, As she looks down on us from above. A fluffy white cloud is her cushion, As she waits on her chubby knees, For the cherub on a neighboring cloud, To fly over on heaven's soft breeze. But he's too busy to notice her, This little angel dressed all in blue, There are glistening stars just out of reach, And he's determined to catch one or two. She watches intently at his attempts, Until finally there's one in his hand, He gives a big grin and throws it to her, But she misses...it falls toward the land. Leaning over the clouds they watch it go, Across the night darkened sky, Falling ever so gently to the earth, Into the pocket of some passerby. The two cherubs started to giggle, They'd have to play that game again soon, And from the light of their precious smiles, A halo was formed 'round the moon. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 09-16-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, Bonnie, this is precious! Simply delightful! I love it! Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
So that's the halo of color I see around the moon!  Bonnie, this was magical! Always a journey I go on, when reading your wonderfully penned work.  <*\\\>< Be an organ donor...give your heart to Jesus! |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Denise, Thanks you so much for reading and for your kind reply, glad you enjoyed it. Becky, Yep, now you know!!!! Thanks for your encouraging reply. Bonnie |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Bonnie... What a truly wonderful poem!!! It makes me feel lighthearted and uplifted!! thank you for this one!! Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Bonnie, Dearest friend, you've created another masterpiece of angelic splendor with you heavenly pen.Bravo, sweet friend. I'd love to see a little book published, filled with your angelic poems. What a treasure that would be! love, Ellie Summers haunting melody that awakens the butterflies, calling them to join the dance in their silent song of praise to God. eL |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Sunny1 - So glad you enjoyed this, thanks for reading. Awwww Ellie, you're too kind. Thanks for the kind reply. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Bonnie~ .gif) You positively light up the forum with this little beauty ! Thank you for hanging smiles all over the night. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thought I saw a bright light coming from around here somewhere. Wonderfully whimsical poem. Two cherubs at play in the clouds....what could be sweeter than that? |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Aw, Bonnie, this is really sweet!!!! |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
I am definitely going to bookmark this page! I have to keep this one in my files! I love it!! You have a great imagination! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Lovely!"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
So thats how it happened. What a creative story... Great imagery Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is just too sweet and cute, yes, adorable is the word! Pardon me, lady, but your talent is showing...Smiles from me, I love this one!!! |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Just captivating Bonnie...well done I just adore this piece from you Wonderful writings ~Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi BSC, A tale sent from heaven, and one I shall cherish, you posses a loving spirit thank you for sharing this wonderful poem. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Thanks for the smiles.. HUGS "If you always do what you've always done You'll always be where you are right now." Author Unknown |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Bonnie, What a beautiful, delightful narrative, sparkling and laced with such rich imagination and joy. A REAL pleasure to read! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has past Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Bonnie I think the halo light is glowing around YOU, and it lights the entire forum. And you have brightened my day. Thank you Liz |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Very cute. Got to smile very early this morning. I thank you for posting it. I often wondered what cause falling stars now I know. If the book comes out let me know |
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Beth Member
since 2000-07-06
Posts 468WA, Australia |
~I simply adored this! It made me smile!~ ~Cherie~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Adorable! What a sweet and tender scene this is Bonnie ... I could envision them perfectly as they played! Beautifully portrayed, loved this delightful poem! Best wishes, /Kit |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Bonnie this is magical. I could see those two cute little angels hard at play and it brought a smile to my face. Thanks for sharing this wonderful treasure. Juls |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
BSC, How absolutely delightfully sweet... just oozing with lovely images and charm. Fun filled and fabulous. I enjoyed it immensely Take care, Linda Munday |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bonnie--captivating, precious poem...what wonderful thoughts spin through you, dear poet...love it! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This was precious. I couldn't help but smile when I read it. Elizabeth |
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Alicat Member Elite
since 1999-05-23
Posts 4094Coastal Texas |
Bonnie...this one blessed me with a wonderful smile, even before my first cup of coffee this morning! And that is a feat hard to accomplish. |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
This was way to sweet......brought a smile to me this morning.....What a wonderful write. Jenn E |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Bonnie~ This is a little gem! So sweet and well written, I love the thought! This is now my favourite of yours. Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
BSC, this was a wonderful read. Brought a smile to my face this sunday morning. Parker |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Wow, I humbly thank you all for reading this and for all of your kind replies, they truly are so very appreciated. Bonnie |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
bonnie- this is precious. i love it. a big 'thank you' to marge for pointing me in the direction of this beauty. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet. -vlraynes |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BSC, What a gem you have written here!! So beautiful!!!! Wonderful writing!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
a very nice and beautiful picture u have painted...i loved the scenery the most, and the event that was taking place bewteen these two angels....i enjoyed this a lot..thanx for the read "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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JnR4eva Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 377Bronx, NY |
a very nice and beautiful picture u have painted...i loved the scenery the most, and the event that was taking place bewteen these two angels....i enjoyed this a lot..thanx for the read "my love is my motivation my love is my inspiration perception of this poem is your interpretation" -- rlt |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So very beautiful Bonnie...what a lovely poetic weave you have shared with us~ |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Lovely and etherial! Corinne |
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BirdeeB Member
since 2000-09-16
Posts 106USA |
heartfelt BirdeeB |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
This is soooo .... MAGICAL and ADORABLE Oh how you've brought much pleasure To my reading tonite I'm keeping this one for awhile Coco |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
BSC~ This is absolutely beautiful, my friend! I couldn't have ever dreamed of a better way to start off a week. Thank you so much for putting a grin on my face and a smile in my heart! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
I thank you all from the bottom of my heart, your replies are so appreciated. Wow.... Thanks again, Bonnie |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
That's sweet. Melton |
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monte Junior Member
since 2000-06-22
Posts 33 |
When is your book on angle poems coming out, I can't wait to read it, your best work is when you write about angles, keep up the good work. |
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WhiteNite Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 241Montgomery, AL |
(speachless) I wear my heart on my sleeve to show the emotions that I can't express with words. --Dave |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Moving this into my library.  Elizabeth |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
How beautiful....I love it....and I want to think maybe that little boy may be my angel I miss so much. |
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soozieque_28 Junior Member
since 2000-11-28
Posts 28Tennessee |
How beautiful....I love it....and I want to think maybe that little boy may be my angel I miss so much. |
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