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Not realy a Poem, expression of emotions
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Not realy a Poem, expression of emotions |
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Fee Member
since 2000-08-07
Posts 381Melbourne, Australia |
How am I supposed to forget the phone call at 5.00am A voice with such anxiety as he spoke his words to me. Numbly I replied ok, before it sank in, Permission I recall him asking the words burnt like fire I need an answer, I can’t hold on seconds count or she’ll be gone. If that was not hard enough, to authorise such a thing now I had to phone him up and tell him what I did. I could hear the same numbness as I spoke on the phone, I’ll be there as soon as I can no time to be alone. Minutes turned to Hours, Hours turned to Days Now another decission a choice we had to make. I remeber asking to myself, maybe if I hadn’t would we still be doing this would it still have happened. So as we left and said goodbye, machines became unplugged then came the wait for another call to say she’s gone above. As I hung up the phone, I turned to him and said Dad it breaks my heart to say, I am sorry Mum is dead. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
WOW now this is great writing.........what expression youhave made here Welcome to Passions  The best and most beaytiful things in the world cannot be seen or touched...but are felt in the heart (Helen Keller) |
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jfilius Junior Member
since 2000-08-14
Posts 29 |
What a great display of such sad emotions! Letting go is always the hardest part! I hope both you and your dad are doing fine in the wake of your terreble loss. John |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Fee* In your book this may not be a poem...but it is most definately Poetry...such intense feeling that you shared with your reader...that is poetry...My apologies for you pain~ |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I'm so sorry for your loss Fee ... thank you for pointing me to this link, you have truly touched my heart with these sorrowful thoughts. To receive a phonecall like this, is a very numbing experience. Again, I'm so sorry for your loss ... Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A very dramatic expression of the loss of a family member...take care...James |
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