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Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-09-16 08:46 AM

So very alone in a crowded room,
The noise is not welcome; o'er me it looms.
Loud ramblings of chatter right next to my ear.
I inwardly cower; I'm looked at quite queer.

My mind seeks calm peace, of solitude pine.
Prefer sharing candle; carafe of fine wine....
A stroll nearing dusk by a waterway's fall...
Long respite on lap in cool shade by stone wall.

My heart needs not many to feel warm, secure.
Your softness of voice shall surround, be the lure.
Firm fingers caress as arms draw me in tight....
For never alone when your eyes reach my light.

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-09-16 09:53 AM

This is very beautiful, Chanson! A crowd of two is sufficient!

Denise

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

2 posted 2000-09-16 10:19 AM

How deliciously intimate...this is lovely!

~ Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

3 posted 2000-09-16 11:17 AM

Denise, the few the better sometimes.

Happy you enjoyed

Claire, thank you for the peek!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-09-16 09:04 PM

I couldn't agree more, this is the way life should be spent. Written beautifully.
catalinamoon

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2000-09-16 09:07 PM

How very lovely and intimate. Enjoyed the read.

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2000-09-16 11:42 PM

catalinamoon,
Spending life this way would certainly be nice, but I'd settle for just a few days. hehehe Thank you! Your visit means alot.

Mark,
I'm happy you enjoyed.
Thank you muchly!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2000-09-17 01:41 AM

Suffice to say you spoke for me as well when you wrote this and said it so much better than I could

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

8 posted 2000-09-17 06:11 AM

Wilfred,
Again and always a big Thank You
for reading.

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-Song of Gesture

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