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Open Poetry #9

Calm Surrender (acrostic)

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

0 posted 2000-09-16 12:33 PM

Calm Surrender

Completely submit to soothing thoughts
Allow peace to take over your troubled waters
Let go of the oars, let the sails carry you
Melt like butter, ride with the wind

Sooth your soul under wings of love
Under it all, fear not to test the waters
Rejoice in the joy of the moment
Replenish your mind daily of this knowledge
Endure all things, there is a purpose
Never fear whats in the water
Dare to share these thoughts
Enter in the water, it won't overtake you
Remember, love conquers fear

BloomingRose

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 09-16-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-09-16 12:38 PM

I surrender......I surrender......(hands up in the air reaching for my butterfly).

Lovely read and so full of wisdom and truth..LOVED it

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

2 posted 2000-09-16 08:20 AM

Mark,
You sound like you were convinced it's time to surrender and take a break.

Deb

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

3 posted 2000-09-16 08:55 AM

BloomingRose,

How true this poem is

Very well done.. with a message everyone should take to heart and follow.

rp25

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 2000-09-16 09:23 AM

Beautiful, flowing and full of wisdom!

Denise

BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

5 posted 2000-09-16 10:47 AM

Thanks Rp25 and Denise...now if I just had a sailboat

Deb

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