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0 posted 2000-09-15 05:32 PM




My Muse

by

Michael Auguste


For thirty years my pen lay still
A poet who had no words to share
And then along came, Meadowmuse
A friend I've come to know as, Claire

She read the old poems that I had
Encouraged me that I write more
Saw something in them I could not
I really felt my writing poor

In April my first poem was born
The wait of thirty years had past
I finally had something to say
The words had come to me at last

How different was my writing style
So much more depth was I to find
The thirty years had so changed me
Now green this meadow in my mind

The broken hearted poems are gone
My poetry now is that of hope
I write of love and fantasy
Of times in life I've had to cope

Sweet Claire is always quick to praise
To build such confidence in me
I've let her know she is my muse
Responsible for words you see

Now eighty new poems have seen light
And yet my pen's still filled with ink
I still can't believe that I can write
My writing done with did I think

I'll call this poem my thank you note
To this dear muse with long red hair
For showing me I can still write
For all her faith and being there



Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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1 posted 2000-09-15 06:15 PM


Oh, this is so sweet...Claire is inspirational to me as well, her kind words of encouragement in replies and her always perfectly wonderous poetry to read, you are very lucky to have her as a muse, and she lucky to have you as a friend.
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2 posted 2000-09-15 06:57 PM



Michael...
          You are very lucky to have Claire for a friend and a muse. She has brought the artist out in your words, and as always, they are beautiful.

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3 posted 2000-09-15 07:30 PM


Hi Martie,

Yes, Claire and her gifted words are certainly an inspiration to us all.  She makes both a wonderful friend and muse...I've learned a lot from her.  Thank you.

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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4 posted 2000-09-15 07:34 PM


I like this

There are enough colours in the world,
To paint your own dreams,
You won't get them,
Till you try.


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5 posted 2000-09-15 07:46 PM


Michael~
She shares so graciously with us all ...
her lovely inspiration.
You are fortunate indeed to have her friendship so close.

This is an openly honest write for a
beautiful lady.
Thanks for sharing with us.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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6 posted 2000-09-15 09:01 PM


Michael, I will forever continue to have faith and confidence in your ability to express yourself in writing. You have so very much to say, and such a natural way of sharing it. And you are exactly right, dear friend ~ your pen IS still filled with ink. (((you)))

*** Martie, Sunny, Marge...sweet ladies, I thank you.  

~ Claire  < !signature-->

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau



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7 posted 2000-09-15 09:24 PM


Sunny, Maria $ Marge,

Thank you all for your kind words...this isn't about my writing so much as it is about a dear friend who freely shares with all of us in such an unselfish way...She's a good lady.  

Michael


Proust-
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8 posted 2000-09-15 11:16 PM


Claire,

I want to personally thank you for all the help you've given me with my poetry and the inspiration that only you, my muse, can provide.  More than anything though, I want to thank you for your dear and wonderful friendship. It means so much to me...

Take care,

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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9 posted 2000-09-16 04:45 AM



play it again, Sam

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10 posted 2000-09-16 04:03 PM


Michael
What a wonderful write about meadowmuse. BTTT.

Be well
Kethry.

"It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures;
but it is the loss that shapes the image,
gathers the flowers weaves the garland."-

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11 posted 2000-09-16 05:50 PM


Kethry,

Thank you...she's a dear and wonderful lady.

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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12 posted 2000-09-16 08:37 PM


Lovely, and a special tribute. Glad that you started writing again Michael, you have a woonderful way with your writing, I enjoy it, as do many others.
Catalinamoon

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13 posted 2000-09-16 09:29 PM


Very nicely said. Your talent has only just been dormant...

American Princess




It's only me, thinking out loud...

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14 posted 2000-09-17 05:01 AM


Cat and A.P. thank you...But really, let all of us thank her...

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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15 posted 2000-09-17 05:56 AM


Michael, I think Claire must be a very intelligent lady. She's spot on with her faith in your writing! Well said and well written.
Love,
Dee

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16 posted 2000-09-17 10:52 AM


this is a very sweet and gracious tribute
to your muse...
the exceptional poetess Lady Claire...
so many times she has left me with such poet envy  
she inspires us all with her grace of words
and she makes me strive to be a better poet.
As for you discovering poetry again ...
I know the wonderful release and contentment
that gift is...
someone extraordinary gave me back my poets pen after years of it laying silent
Heres my wish for continued inspiration for us all
take care
jm


There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


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17 posted 2000-09-17 12:33 PM


Dee & Janet,

Thanks to the both of you for your kind words about our Lady Claire, a dear friend and a gifted poet.

Michael


Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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