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Lost In TimeAn Endless Love
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Lost In TimeAn Endless Love |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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~Lost In Time~~An Endless Love~ It's midnight, the year 1883 the lamppost light eluminates shadows of night misty fog, a shroud hovers, encircles to grip his mind gazing at the heavens, he relives the past waits to see her drift slowly by, a repeat scene rehearsal's of endless dreams... A lone star falls, a trail of white flickers a fire to pierce his naked heart wet cobblestones reveal where footprints once stepped memories, moments lost... 3 days pass, still he waits it's midnight, intently he listens sounds of soft footsteps approach he rushes to see, lost again only a single red rose on cobblestone waits BloomingRose |
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Cuddlez Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 422Walla Walla, WA 99362 |
Well, this wasn't what I was expecting  ). What a sad poem. Hoping it wasn't you that experienced this. Forever love can be uplifting but also so SAD...Time flies? Say it not so, time stays we go. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
A love that lives in the heart and in memories of the heart shall forever leave footprints in the rain. Wonderful read and such tender sadness conveyed in this one...but a peaceful serenity as well. |
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nando Member
since 2000-06-09
Posts 87Vaxjo, Smaland, Sweden |
BloomingRose Romantic sad poem you`ve written here. Made me think of a time when I thought I had met my eternal love...Still waiting though  -nando- |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Romantic and everlasting. . . excellent. . . Roses speak much without a word. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Thanks for reading. It is sort of sad, but we all at one time or other experiance lost love. Deb  |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Deb, you certainly belong at Passions! Many a time there has been poems of long lost love and lives lived before, and this captures the gist perfectly... thank you... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
sunshine, thank you for your kind words. I love to relive events, even if it's only my imagination... Deb |
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