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ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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0 posted 2000-09-15 12:54 PM


in self-judgement ...

i've seen the face of fear
on the bravest man i know

i've smelled the stench of death
on the floral beauty of the rose

i've heard the cries of sorrow
in the strings of symphony's song

i've tasted the bitter of defeat
in the winning of my last race

i've felt the malaise of disease
in the healing of my soul

i've sensed my own evils
in the humanity of us all

a brave man
fears what he does not know
'til battle he does engage

a beautiful rose
dies a quick death
only to be born again

an orchestral psalm
relies on all emotions
to sweetly play upon our ears

the fastest sprinter
knows to quit upon defeat
and begin to race with the mind

my resurrected soul
never to save without the ills
to wake me from deepest pits

my wrongs
easily justified in humanity's court
now a declaration from my own heart


M.A. Miller
09.15.00
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My calling before me, let quill be my offering;
For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive.

M.A.






[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 09-15-2000).]

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Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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1 posted 2000-09-15 01:24 PM


Oh Mark...you judge so harshly friend...you are a wonderful man and a premiere poet...you touch me with every thing you write
Victoria
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2 posted 2000-09-15 01:52 PM


nicely written MMiller..enjoyed..
ma miller
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3 posted 2000-09-15 06:32 PM


Paula ... thanks for those kind words ... i believe it's every poet's plot to touch others in some fashion ... i'm glad you like this one

Victoria ... thanks for reading and enjoying

[This message has been edited by MA Miller (edited 09-15-2000).]

Martie
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4 posted 2000-09-15 06:42 PM


I catch a hint of wisdom in your judgement...well done verse!
ma miller
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since 2000-07-11
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5 posted 2000-09-16 02:32 AM


Martie,

wisdom is a power that i've yet to communicate (at least not to the outside world) ... thank you so much for reading ...

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