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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx 
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hour past midnight, growing on two no place to go nothing to do typhoon raging howling with rain slowly swarming adding it's pain korean soup beside me computer in my face thousand miles from home living in another place held in a nation besieged by it's own name no past no future no chance at fame in a bitter land I dwell one betrayed by memories past creating a smaller version of hell as long as this crisis will last and so for now reality must be untill the world can finally see "There were times in my life when I was going insane tryin to walk through the pain when I lost my grip and I hit the floor yeah I thought I could leave but couldn't get out the door" - Aerosmith "Amazing" |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
hi Desperado ... nice work here ... i take it you're in Korea, maybe in the military border patrol? ... if so, tough situation and God's speed to ya' ... thanks. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"held in a nation besieged by it's own name" "and so for now reality must be untill the world can finally see" you always had a way of seeing things so clearly.... take care over there, my friend! miss you MUCH  oh...i'm coming back to edit to tell you i sent you a much BIGGER hello under where you responded to my poem... don't want to repeat myself.. LOL... but in case you didn't go back to that thread...thought i'd let you know ... God bless and keep you safe, des! [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
We never learn do we? Theres always someone who thinks that they are bigger badder and more worthy...this is an excellent look at our stupidity...take care... I have the utmost respect and admiration for service members. |
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Athena, Goddess of Wisdom Junior Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 27 |
I'm sending this back up to the top so it can be read by more people. This was very dynamic. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi desperado...So glad you had some computer time...I know the situation you are in is tough...and your take on it in this poem chills my heart...take care of yourself. Your poem, very well done! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hey, des, you survived a weekend at Nan's. How much tougher can Korea be??? Great seeing your name again, good sir |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
deep stuff here Des m'dear, I've missed ya oodles. *much luv, hugs, kisses (strictly platonic *wink*)* Take care ~Heather |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Great poem, Des... and so good to see you posting! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Hey James... How wonderful to see you - and the Intruder - all in the same day - I'm SOOOOOOO psyched...  I love this poem, btw - Looks like you're ready to come home, eh??? We miss ya lots - and think of you often, my friend...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Desperado~ Good to see you duck in here and leave us a gem. Take care and God speed you home. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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desperado Member
since 1999-05-24
Posts 312FT Hood,Tx |
wow. thanks for all your wonderful comments. I've been busy with work and all, but I try to find the time to share what I can. this place is awesome though. if I wasn't going back to texas after this place, I'd prolly stay here another year. I'm starting to learn hangul (korean), but it's a process that takes time. I miss you all. you people are my family, your words are my courage, your smiles my strength. now if I could find some way to get a lazy job at my next assignment. ummm... I don't think so. LOL it was a blessing to see so many names on this thread. I was counting on at least one, but this many was astounding. perhaps I'll be able to pay it back in some small way. once again, thank you. p.s. - I'm an uncle again btw. |
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