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Pawn Takes Queen
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia 
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She wakened the pen quest squeaking wet she went pent and quaking weak even she sank weak and weeping In her nape she knew the kant squawking and spewing the sank queen spent September's pew steeped in quantum stew she knew the pane Kane enabled snake taken tense she could tweak the pawn rank castle to the king side the sane equation true squeaking wet she went pent and quaking she went to wean or not the question in the next sequence she knew pawn takes queen |
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Corazon Senior Member
since 2000-02-02
Posts 1209 |
love this, sounds like she is a winner either way  |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
VERY COOL POEM ... great style ... panache ... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
this is a very interesting piece, feathered poet... it's got hawke written all over it... this poem has a strongness to it... it's fascinating, yet... enigmatic... it's hard to explain. i really don't understand it, to tell you the truth, but i like it a lot... another anagrammatic twist of words filling the reader with images... you have a very diacritic style. [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
the rematch will be available on Pay Per View... Corazon -- thanks -- and I think -- You may be right.. MA -- thank you very much -- I don't think anyone has ever used the word panache in any reference to me dor-- interesting huh? lol and I have a democratic smile? like Jimmy Carter? just keep reading -- the meaning will come to you  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Reb, Well done, I liked squeaking wet she went. x2 Be well Keth. "It is the image in the mind that links us to lost treasures; but it is the loss that shapes the image, gathers the flowers weaves the garland."- |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i said diacritic style, not democratic smile! geez... and i still don't get it  |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
you think I'm a pedophile??? :0 lol  shall I break out the Little Orphan Annie Decoder Ring??? |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
ok correct me if I am wrong, but I think this is about love undeclared (ie the pawn for the queen) ??? ~Heather btw thw format and style was intriguing and neat |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
is that what it's about, heather??? damn! well i declare! LOL. THANK you for explaining... i'm glad someone finally did!!! ok, now listen up Rebellious One, i refuse to allow you to make me appear.... ummm... oh phooey, what's the word... *trying to think* .. oh yeah.... obvlivious!!! in public (is that the right word?).... geez.... little orphan annie decoder ring... that's thilly  |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Definitely a sensuous poem of love and maybe ....yes definitely lusty as well. Reading between innuendos and lines of FIRE hat passion. Could be wrong but don't think so. Great read and let me know how far off I am.....(waiting to see if this gets bumped to addey)  |
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