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Come Share the Night
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Come Share the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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The sunset is a watermelon hue in the still of the afternoon I wish you could see this painting with me as it rests upon the ocean I want to share each moment without you I am in disarray the sunset rests upon the ocean a siesta in the ocean's chalet I wish you could feel the blush of sienna skin and watch the ginger in my hair dance to the wind's violin Would it be too much to ask? to share the night with you our silhouettes'in moonlight and wind chimes of bamboo |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful Victoria! I love these lines. . . "I wish you could feel the blush of sienna skin and watch the ginger in my hair dance to the wind's violin" Simply inspired. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sven. Glad you are inspired. Appreciate your words  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Wistful wondering... I like this! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Not to much to ask and after reading this wonderful verse...I would have to say it HAS been shared. Your words paint a lovely portrait and the beauty has been seen. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you suthern and Mark..for your very kind words. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ Very nicely shared. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Marge and for taking time to read |
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