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In Awe Of You
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In Awe Of You |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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In Awe Of You The flicker in your eyes The comfort of your laugh The soft curve of your face The warmness of your touch The brightness of your smile The welcoming of your heart The kindness of your thoughts The romanticism of your words The passion filled feel of your kiss The soothing sound of your whispers For all the reasons that I will always be So completely and totally in awe of you And you, the amazing way you can bring out The love I’ve had inside that has been waiting To shine through bright and sure, waiting for you [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-14-2000).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is really beautiful and I'm familiar with those traits and, yes, they are very real and very important. Excellent writing... |
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Cheryl Flemming Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 102 |
What a beautiful poem. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Balladeer - Aww.. thank you for your kind words  Cheryl - I'm glad you stopped in And welcome to Passions  |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very lovely sentiments.....standing in awe of you now with your verse. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Tender and sweet sentiments RosePetals ... your words flowed beautifully and genuinely in this lovely verse, nicely penned! Best wishes, /Kit |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
suthern - Thank you for taking time to stop in Mark - Awww.. what a sweet reply  Thank you.Kit - I'm glad you liked it Thank you for stopping in |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Really great RP. . . and I won't make an "awe" joke!! LOL Excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven - lolol.. I know the temptation is almost unbearable to make a joke.. I'm proud of you  hehe. Thanks for stopping in [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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