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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Stormy Weather A true confession containing no pretense of denial seemed to me for a very short while living was getting so much better and my smile was rolling back into style. But perhaps to remind me how melancholy life can surely be you came right out and told me you're busy and you don't have any free time for me. What did I do to deserve this? Oh yeah, I remember now. Yesterday I told you I was too busy to see you and took away your smile. Damn I'm not too good at this but I'll sure learn to do it better cause I like the sunshine of your smile much better than this stormy weather. Jameslee@September14,2000 SorryIdidn'tmeantohurtyou. |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
this was really touching, if she reads this I hope she sees the message good luck  ~Heather |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Awww James... this one you've penned is sooooooooo sweet! 'Cause I like the sunshine of your smile much better than the stormy weather'...this is too adorable! Thanks 12345 for sharing Dani |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Heather and Dani...I appreciate the nice words...James |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
James, I can't imagine anyone not having time for your smile, as it is surely a direct reflection of your radiant heart. As sincere as this poem is, it is also VERY well written. Take care, my friend. (((you))) ~ Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
James, I love opening your poems...I always know I am gonna be transported to such lovely heights. |
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