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The Soul Knows |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Into my mind I did dive Trying to find the answer For why we're alive I looked through my knowledge That I've learned from the start The answer wasn't there So I went to my heart My heart I questioned The answer do you know? There was no reply So I went to my soul When I was there The truth I did find The answer we all Will learn in time |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wow! You took a subject that is so undefinable and laid it out in perfect form!! Really nice job, my friend!!  Today is a gift.... That is why they call it 'the Present'! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
really loved this poem, bumping this up  When I was there The truth I did find The answer we all Will learn in time This is the hour when the mysteries emerge A strangeness so hard to reflect A moment so moving goes straight to your heart" JOy divison |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Sunny1 and Brian Glad you liked this one. jlocke Love is the law, love under will. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Same verse that Brian picked...although I liked the whole poem the last verse was perfectly put from quill to paper so to say. When I was there The truth I did find The answer we all Will learn in time [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Hey thanks a lot. I only wish I answer could be known now, to all! [This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 09-15-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Knowing the answer may take away the heart of innocence that we need to be able to accept what is really there. Everything for a reason my friend.....like the mystery of some aspects....gives room to exercise the process of thought, hope, and dedication in life. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hi JLocke, A wonderful poem you've penned... I enjoyed this read especially the last few verses... Coco |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Very well penned! The last two lines are perfect Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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jlocke Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169CC,TX |
Mark Your reply is all too true. Thank you. Coco and Melissa I'm very glad this pleased you. Thank you. < !signature--> Love is the law, love under will. [This message has been edited by jlocke (edited 09-16-2000).] |
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