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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida

0 posted 2000-09-14 01:16 PM


~Splendor Of Warm Sunlight~


Splendor of warm sunlight
fires on my skin
daydreams float, as driftwood
memories in slow motion
waft across the misty sea

Waves lick the shore
as castles melt in sand
fingertips dip sifted diamonds
a reflection of emotions I watch

Seagulls soar in salty wind
a love song they sing ...

~BloomingRose~




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Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2000-09-14 01:29 PM



BloomingRose....
               This is beautiful!! It took me back to my childhood and many happy days of daydreaming at the beach in the warm sun!!
     I thank you so much for the memories...


Today is a gift....
That is why they call it
'the Present'!



BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida
2 posted 2000-09-14 04:14 PM


Sunny,
I got lost in the same thing. I love to go to the beach and hear nothing more than surf and seagulls. Glad you like.  

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-09-14 04:19 PM


You have given me a very special moment with this one and I too love the beach...think most people do.  I was able to spend the night on the beach just about 2 weeks ago and just listen to the surf and it was so relaxing.  This took me back there and I loved it much.
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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Florida
4 posted 2000-09-14 08:33 PM


Mark, I am glad you like this one. There is something very peacful about the ocean. A wonderful creation to behold.
Kit McCallum
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since 2000-04-30
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Ontario, Canada
5 posted 2000-09-14 08:39 PM


Beautiful description Blooming Rose! Thank you for this wonderful imagery ... very nicely penned!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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Michigan
6 posted 2000-09-14 09:15 PM


The rays of your poetry have warmed my heart tonight...absolutely beautiful~
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